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for Circe Academy Extra Credit

by Bishonen

person Honest
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am a little chagrined to be writing this after stating that some character background would be great for your main story... Ha, Ha. You deliver pretty well for what these snippets are: Background fluff always pads well for a world's mythos. I was very surprised that you also picked two characters completely out of the blue (Mika and Tsubame, and very happy that the world of Terra is being fleshed out just a bit more. Granted, these pieces were unmistakeably erotic in nature, and the character building was relegated to the secondary position. Seeing how well the scenes you depicted took off, I cannot fault you in the slightest for what you wrote. This extra credit and the original story work extremely well together, and I hope your muse stays strong for a good long while.
Thanks for writing what you have.
Thanks for reading this.
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yum, I have to say I'm a fan of your stories and I love the new addition.