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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

person miles
schedule September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay ! An update ! Thank you ! :)
Humm, there is a secret door or something in the billard room...
And Jack's proposition is not bad ! :P
JC must think about it...
schedule September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know where I've been that I missed an update! Now that I'm all caught up, I'm more confused than ever! lol

Cole seems like he's hiding something. What's going on with him? Why is he always down in the poolroom? Why didn't he want JC to look at his head when he hit it? Why won't he talk to JC?

And wtf is up with Jake? It's like he can't make up his mind if he wants JC or not. Now he does, but only in the physical sense. He doesn't mind sharing him with Cole. How nice of him. I doubt Cole will agree to his arrangement. And JC shouldn't agree to it either.

Oh, and that dig about Michael J. wasn't funny Passh. You could have used another analogy. It wasn't nice to make fun of him b/c of some horrible disease he has.

Other than that, the last two chapters were great! :)
person kylee
schedule September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh the suspense is killing me! Jake and Cole are two complete mysteries for poor JC to solve. It does seem that there is a lot going on in Cole's world right now. Plus regardless of what JC says, Cole probably knows that JC is not completely over Jake. Regardless of everything, I think that Jake does care about Cole's well being so maybe things will get better if they do agree to "share".
person Mint
schedule September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yey! What a good chapter! Enjoyed it lotz! Please update asap!
person Mandy
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Where is next chapter?
person Mint
schedule August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I miss you already; come back asap :D
person Anon reader
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while and there hasn't been any updates, so I will be removing this off my bookmarks.
But if the author one day comes back again and write,
YOU BETTER BE READY, BECAUSE I SURE AS HELL AM COMING BACK!

Until then, see you soon, one of my top FF forever!
person DNight
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*runs behind nearest person* Cole is scary O_O wow XD thanks for the update XD
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay. I thought I wouldn't see this be continued again.. Glad I was wrong!
person obsessive-much?
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I literally just pulled an all nighter to read every single chapter of this fic from number 1 to number 34. I am exhausted, and I have work in roughly an hour and a half. Do I regret my decision? Hell no! This is an abso-fucking-lutely amazing story! The way you lay the ground work in the early chapters for things that are revealed in later chapters is flawless and the raw emotion that your characters exude makes them feel so real. Great job, I honestly can't wait to see where you take this because I have so many theories running through my head right now. I am looking forward to your next update! =D