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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am thinking maybe Gabe really likes Joe but was experimenting with JC and didn't figure the guy
he acutally has the hots for would walk in and catch them. It's going to be interesting to
see how the boys explain what they were doing and why to Joe. It would have also been funny
if JC's sis Billi walked in on them or even better his neighbor Jake. Molly humping Sam?
That should give JC a warning about the goings on at Jake's house.

I didn't realize Jake had a son, how old is he, and when will he be making an appearance?
person Mintgirl
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! Okay, you click on "Edit Profile," and just uncheck the box that is "Prevent anonymous reviews." That box is checked by default. I love the Carnalli chars! Are you gonna continue with that?!! Bye!
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just re-read the chapters again and forgot to mention in my previous review
that I didn't realize Jake had a girlfriend so that kind of throws me for a loop
because I was thinking story was going to focus on somekind of twisted love
triangle with JC and Jake and some other as of yet unknown male figure (kind of
like Alain with his brothers in the Carnelli series). I also noticed it says
rapefic so hope nothing seriously bad happens to JC. By the way, I love the Carnelli
Complex stories you wrote and seriously hope you will consider continuing their
story where you left it off in Chronic Carnelli Complex (second installment) because
I think there is so much more left to be told.

person Will Treaty
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just love J.C. and his whole crazy family including Sam the cat. This story is very funny so
far but I know there must be some angst coming soon. If J.C. keeps investigating or rather
spying on his neighbor, he is going to find himself in serious trouble that he might not be
able to get out of. I am thinking Jake could either be a criminal or maybe like in Witness
Protection or possibly an undercover cop planted in J.C.'s neighborhood to catch the real
criminal.

I wonder if J.C. is the boy Jake was eyeing in the showers guess I will find out soon.

This is really good so far and I like it.

W.T.
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! I really enjoyed the interaction between Jc and Gabe before and during their 'experimentation'. I'm not sure what's going on with Jake but since this story is categorized under threesomes/moresomes, I'm guessing things are going to start getting crazy! Please continue!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope Gabe figures out what J.C. is up to and possibly talking him out of snooping around after Jake. I love
J.C.'s crazy family. I don't think Jake (and any of his accomlices) would dare hurt J.C. or he would have to face the wrath of J.C.'s mother and her life partner not to mention Billi. I wouldn't want to mess with them. I am curious if J.C.'s older brother will eventually show up to visit.

person Mint (Too lazy to sign in)
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad you followed my directions, and look, you already have "anonymous" people who don't log in reviewing this story! Anyway, great job! Luvin this lots... cant wait for more! I also reviewed some of you other stories 2! Keep writing!
person Mintgirl
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You should let anonymous people review so that you can get more reviews!!! You should do this for your other stories 2! This is just a suggestion xD !!
person kylee123
schedule March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
JC and Jake. Very cute. It seems JC is already a little obsessed with his neighbour. I cant wait to see how things will go for them. Very nice new story Passhanette.
person miles
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Like it so far !
I was waiting for the third CC but this one seems promising too ! ^^
I'll wait for the next chapter for sure !!!