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March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just read the three chapters you have written and have to admit I want more. I love the characters you
have created to bring this story to life. I want more so please don't give up on it.
have created to bring this story to life. I want more so please don't give up on it.
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March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I have reviewed this story yet so in case I haven't please consider this
my first review.
I love the concept of J.C. investigating what his neighbor Jake is up to. I love J.C.'s wacky but
lovable family. I am looking forward to reading more and finding out what this guy is actually up
to.
I think Gabe and J.C. should have been more careful carrying out their sexual fantasy together and
how Joe will react to it.
my first review.
I love the concept of J.C. investigating what his neighbor Jake is up to. I love J.C.'s wacky but
lovable family. I am looking forward to reading more and finding out what this guy is actually up
to.
I think Gabe and J.C. should have been more careful carrying out their sexual fantasy together and
how Joe will react to it.
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March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and want to read more of it. If you are able, please update at least once a week. I want
to find out what Johnny discovers about his neighbor and what Joe will do after catching him and Gabe going down
on each other.
to find out what Johnny discovers about his neighbor and what Joe will do after catching him and Gabe going down
on each other.
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March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I always love reading a good mystery/suspense story and this sounds like one. I like J.C. very much and his family too especially Billi. Hopefully, Jake won't decide to break into J.C.'s house when he's home alone or something and see what he's up to.
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March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think J.C. should have made sure his bedroom door was locked before he and Gabe started experimenting cause you never know who might walk in on you. I like this story it's different. Will you please make a note in the next chapter how often you will be updating it like once a week/month/etc. I tend to lose track of stories I like cause some authors never get back to story or take too long between updates.
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March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really a good story and I am anxious to find out what is going to happen with J.C.
and his neighbor.
and his neighbor.
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah ! That was a mean cliff !! ^_~
And I can't wait for the next chapter !!
Jake has a girlfriend and a son ?! I thought he was alone and gay ?! My mistake ! ^^'
Update soon, please...
And I can't wait for the next chapter !!
Jake has a girlfriend and a son ?! I thought he was alone and gay ?! My mistake ! ^^'
Update soon, please...
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, that was a rather unsuspected but naughty cliffhanger but one that leaves me anxiously waiting
for next chapter to find out what happens between these three friends. It must of been a huge
shock for Jo to walk in on his two best friends and find them in such a compromising position.
How are Gabe and JC going to talk their way out of it I wonder.
I thought Jake was gay but now not sure because he has a girlfriend and son so not sure what
that is about but I am waiting to find out.
for next chapter to find out what happens between these three friends. It must of been a huge
shock for Jo to walk in on his two best friends and find them in such a compromising position.
How are Gabe and JC going to talk their way out of it I wonder.
I thought Jake was gay but now not sure because he has a girlfriend and son so not sure what
that is about but I am waiting to find out.
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your new story and I think J.C. is really cute. I can't wait to find out what else he discovers about
his neighbor.
his neighbor.
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that chapter was funny! I was cracking up at the Charlie Sheen comment. This is the second story on here I've read comments about Charlie Sheen. Poor guy, lol!
Awesome chapter! Boy Gabe's lucky JC is so laid back and doesn't care if he's gay. A lot of best friends would, unfortunately. But now that this Joe guy walked in on them, omg, can't wait for the next update!
Great story! I also like the fact that JC seems a bit obsessed with his neighbor's whereabouts at night and all the robberies going on, haha.
Keep up the great work! :)
Awesome chapter! Boy Gabe's lucky JC is so laid back and doesn't care if he's gay. A lot of best friends would, unfortunately. But now that this Joe guy walked in on them, omg, can't wait for the next update!
Great story! I also like the fact that JC seems a bit obsessed with his neighbor's whereabouts at night and all the robberies going on, haha.
Keep up the great work! :)