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I am glad you explained the history between J.C. and Cole. I wonder if Joe will be jealous of Gabe being friends with Cole.

I just realized you had uploaded another new chapter and am sorry I almost missed it.

I wonder what the deal is between Cole and J.C. It seems like they might have issues with
each other so I hope nothing bad happens to J.C. I don't think Cole will take to kindly
to the fact his dad is coming on to J.C. or vice versa. I thought J.C.s son was like a
toddler or something, don't ask me why but I did.

I am nervous about what is going to happen when Gabe and Joe meet with J.C. at his home.
I was thinking J.C. might be alone with them after leaving J.C.'s house using his friends coming
over to study as an excuse to leave Jake's and avoid Cole. Since this is a Rape fic maybe things
get out of control and poor J.C. is raped by his friends and later is comforted and protected by Cole
and Jake.

I can't wait to find out what the deal is between Jake's son Cole and J.C.
I don't know but for some reason I thought Cole was like a much younger kid
or something. I enjoyed the scene between J.C. and Jake in the bedroom.

I don't really like hairy chested guys (something about them just turns me off *cringes*) but you
make Jake hot.

By the way, I am a girl not a guy reviewing, and Will Treaty is a character in the John Flanagan
Ranger's Apprentice books that I like to read.

W.T.

I am anxious to read the part when Gabe brings Joe back to J.C.'s house. I also want to see how Gabe reacts
to the news of how Joe reacted to J.C. after they got caught experimenting. Will he be mad at Joe for hurting
J.C.?

Nice long chappies are awesome. Thanks for that! Wonder whats up with Cole. Is JC scared of him? Might have to reread the chappies to see if u mentioned this. And I was hoping to see the confrontation btwn J.C. Gabe n Joe! Cant wait for that. I hope JC doesn't get raped but probly will since this is a 'Rapefic.' Anyway, great job like usual. You REALLY are a great writer. Seriously. Hope you can keep writing long chappies like this! You also spelled somewhere (forgot just where) "awile" as "a while." It should be one word. Okay, plz update soon if possible xD

Nooo ! Don't end it like that !! You're little tease !! XDDD
Can't wait for more ! Update soon, please...
I don't know how to take Jake. He seems a good guy...

Here is the sentence: "He was going to be a while finding whatever he was looking for." I think it should be "awhile." I just googled this 2 so I think I'm right. Whatev. You can search if ya wanna! xD

Omg, who's Cole? Ok, he's Jake's son but how old is he? I forgot if you mentioned it before. And how creepy would that be if Jake was coming on to JC and his son is the same age or OLDER than JC? Creepy! lol

And I must say again: I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Joan! Omg, she's a fucking riot! Putting condoms in JC's pocket! Buying him Penthouse and porn! What a cool mom! I did that for my son's best friend when he turned seventeen. He's gay and I bought him two gay pornos and condoms and lube. He was so happy and not embarrassed at all! hahah

Anyway, love the story! Hey, weren't Gabe and Joe coming over JC's house after school? And JC's not there......

Can't wait for the next update! :)

That was kind of embarrassing for poor Gabe and I don't think it bothered J.C. as much as it did his friend.
I think J.C. better be more careful about where he puts his hands when he is trying to explain what happened
to someone. It looks like Joe is the one Gabe has a secret crush on and I think Joe does too and was jealous
about what he walked in on. I really was worried what Joe was going to do to J.C. so was happy his mother came
home and broke the tension between them.

I am finding this story to be very addictive and wish you would at least try and update once a
week. I may not review again until story is finished, not because I don't like it, no, on the
contrary I like it very much. The reason being many stories I start to read are never finished
or the author takes too long to finish them and it drives me crazy.

I think J.C., his family, his friends and what I have read so far about his neighbor are very
interesting characters. They remind me of the classic tv show 'The Adams Family'. LOL, just kidding. But, they are kind of kooky but very entertaining. (I wish I could remember the lyrics to the theme song so will go check it out on a google search.)