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Chapter 8 review!!

I am now wondering what Cole was really doing lurking around J.C.'s truck and bet that it wasn't he was checking the pump (was that it?) but nothing bad better happen to J.C. because now Joe is a witness to the 'crime' if something did happen.

I loved the fight between Joe and Cole, ya gotta love Joe for sticking up for his friends, WTG Joe!!!!

BTW, poor Gabe living with a neat freak of a mother, LOL, and don't know who has it the worse him or J.C.

Finally, Gabe, Joe and J.C. are having the 'talk' and somehow the tables got turned on J.C. and his 'infatuation' with Jake.

I hope you have a happy and blessed Easter!!!

I just realized you uploaded another new chapter so have to review it too.

I won't make it long but will mention that I am now thinking the threesome will be between
Joe/Gabe/JC and that Jake and Cole will be the ones who rape J.C. (???)

Anyway, I loved both these new chapters.

Shit! I had such a long review, but those asinine words at the bottom of my screen were probably wrong. Does anyone else hate those ridiculous words, or is it just me? Why do they even have them? Most of them aren't even friggen words! And more than half of them are fucking undecipherable!

Anyway, Reader's Digest version: I was confused about the comment about Cole and Gabe's mom. I thought Cole and Gabe just met the day before. So how could he not "know Gabe's mom well enough to do that"? He shouldn't know her at all, right? And if they just met, how could they be such good friends already? Ok, enough of my petty questions.....

I have one word for Ellen: PROZAC.

Ok, so I'm super curious as to why Cole was going ballistic on Joe. What does Joe know about Cole? Why does Cole think Joe was spreading rumors about him? And if Joe knows something, well, obviously he does, but since he does, he hasn't mentioned anything to JC about it. Which makes me believe that it involves Joe. Whatever it is. The only thing I could think of is maybe during freshman year, Joe let Cole blow him. Idk, I can't think of anything else that would have Cole worrying about what people think of him. Although he really doesn't seem the type to care what people think of him. I am confused!

That is why I can't wait for the next update! Great job! :)

Did you just upload two new chapters or did I miss reviewing one? I am confused but read all chapters yet again because I love this story so much.

Now, the thing that is bugging me the most is what kind of rumour would Joe be spreading about Cole? What does he know about Cole? These two really hate each other. For a minute I was worried J.C. would get knocked out cold by one of them throwing a punch when he was standing in the middle of them trying to stop their fight.

I like that Gabe and Joe are protective of J.C. and hope they figure out about his spying on Jake, because what if Cole finds out, that won't be good.

If you have free time because of Easter then please by all means keeping plugging out these chapters. They are like candy too me and you are the Easter Bunny.

Yay JC!!! too cute all protective friend. cant wait to see what happens next..... Cole drama to. wanna see what else he does to Joe lol i kinda want Joe to get his but kicked a lil dont really know why but i do. laterz

I asked for more and what do I find? I find two new chapters, yeah!

I am not sure what Cole's motives towards J.C. are and hope he's not going to hurt J.C. but don't know.
If Jake or Cole ever did hurt J.C., I bet Billi and J.C.'s mom would blame themselves.

I really like the bathroom part of chapter and what Billi does to her brother, so should't be allowed.

I would like to know what kind of rumour Joe started against Cole, it must be pretty bad to get a reaction like that out of Cole.

I am mad at Joe for thinking of dating that girl when he can have Gabe.

I still am anxiously waiting for Gabe admitting his feelings to Joe.

I like how Joe and Gabe tease J.C.

Just by reading what happened to J.C. on Thursday morning and Thursday afternoon, I am stressing over what will happen to him on Thurdsay evening.

I just found this story again and made up for what I missed by re-reading all chapters you have uploaded.

I really like Jake's son Cole and the feud that is going on between him and J.C.

Waiting to find out what happens later with Gabe, Joe & J.C. it should be interesting.

More please.....

Yay greatness. cant wait for more

nice nice nice nice nice! i love the story. ill be checking for updates dude, so updaaaaaaaaate.
jc is a hoot!