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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

person iluvmyterrier
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've reviewed this story yet so excuse me if I have amd forgive me if I haven't.

I love this story so much. J.C.'s sister and mother are great and I want to meet his older brother whom you have mentioned. I wish I had a family like his. Jake and Cole are kind of different and I don't know how to take them. J.C's friends are really cool and he's lucky to have them. I like how protective they are of him too.

Waiting for more and thank you for writing/sharing it.
person Will Treaty
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for poor J.C. being at the mercy of his baby sister Billi's mercy. LOL. I hope that J.C.'s day doesn't end as bad as it started. Is Joe trying to make Gabe jealous? I am anxious to see what happens later after school since that is when they are suppose to talk about things.

Thanks for updating and have a Happy Easter too!!

W.T.
person Mint
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I wasn't expecting a new chapter until tomorrow! Thanks so much for this chappie! Its really amazing how you can update this fast! Even every 2 wks is quick as hell compared to most authors hea! I'm still eager for that meeting between J.C., Joe n Cole. I think Joe likes Cole and wonder if he's actually bi or gay. That shower scene was...interesting! Makes you wonder if Cole secretly likes and/or liked J.C. for awhile and maybe this was y he was irritating to J.C. all those years befoe. I wanna know who's gonna hook up, who this threesome or even THREESOMES will involve. I think it'd be pretty gross if you make one happen between Jake, J.C, and Cole since Jake and Cole are father n son LOL! Anyway wonderful job like usual! I'm eagerly waiting for mo!
person Mint
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sry, I made a mistake. I meant to say "I'm still eager for that meeting between J.C., Joe n GABE. I think Joe likes Gabe and wonder if he's actually..."
person Will Treaty
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I meant to say, I feel so sorry for poor J.C. being at the mercy of his baby sister Billi's makeup/cosmetic bag!!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved the part with J.C. in the shower and then Cole walking in on him, I want more of the story like this.
I thought it was hilarious with Billi putting makeup on J.C. after he took the ambien from his Mom and then getting sprayed by Cole with his body spray. Poor J.C. is treated like a guini pig by his sister.

Bring on more of the kinky boy action please.

person preciouslittlehope
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating a new chapter so fast!!!!!! You are amazing!!!!!!

I really loved this chapter, as usually Billi was hilarious with her antics and torment of J.C. Now, she's in cahoots with Cole and they both are driving him insane. I really feel bad for him and wish his older brother would visit so he's not the only guy living in a house of women. That way he would have an ally.

J.C. really has the hots for Jake especially now that he's seeing Cole as his father. I think he's confused.

schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haahha, I just finished ch. 7 and realized you just updated again! But I'll review ch. 7 before continuing on to ch. 8:

Why is JC thinking about Jake "like that"? Ewwww, isn't he a bit old for him? Why wouldn't he think of Cole like that?

The whole scene where Billi put make-up on JC was hysterical! I've seen that done to guys before; it's really funny! lol

I'm feeling really bad for Gabe now. But doesn't Gabe know that Joe's straight? He's just setting himself up for heartbreak. :(

Ok, onto the next chapter!
person snowleopard
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 review

Oh my gosh! Two chapters in one sitting, I really love you right now!!!

I don't know how J.C. keeps his temper with Billi and her 'evil' ways. The poor kid never gets a break and to be caught twice in one day by Cole; first time in his pj's with make up on and then second time in shower. I loved the part with Cole and J.C. together in the bathroom. I wonder what Cole would think knowing J.C. was thinking of his dad instead of him. I think Cole better try to get on the good side of J.C. and make him notice him.

Happy Easter to you too!!!

I am off to read/review chapter 8.
person Mint
schedule April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay 2 chappies in one day! Thanks!!!! I cant believe u stopped it there before Gabe confessed! How could you?!!! What a mean cliffhanger!! LOL I am curious about what Cole was worried of concerning Joe spreading rumors. I cant honestly trust Cole jus like J.C. because he was LIVID or maybe beyond livid even after he got beat up by J.C.!!! So from this feeling, I am predicting that the rape will involve Cole and J.C. probly! I cant see who else would do this to J.C.! Possible Jake since we dont know all about him. Anyway awesome chapter! Update asap!