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craving an update.

by the way, that drunk girl on her period raping jc and then puking was absolutely HORRENDOUS. kudos for the major grossness factor. it. was. awesome.
that 'incident' no doubt turned joel gay.
can joel neck and back crack? thatd be neat! oh, and he should know about pressure points too right?

I just wanted to wish you and your family a Happy and Blessed Easter!!! That is if you celebrate it, I do!

Have a nice day!!!!

I really love this story especially J.C. and hope you find the time to upload another two new chapters today before Easter Sunday!!!

I love the plot and keep wondering what's going to happen next.

haha! wasnt gabe supposed to be the one confessing. i thought it would be cole ya know, for joel. but i like where this is going with the popa, jake. thats hot. but naughtttttttttttttty. naughty. im eager to find out more about the mystery of what jakes does at night time in the woods.
im wondering if gabes gonna tell joe that hes crushin on him.

Aww, JC was kinda cute in the end, being embarrassed by his sort of crush.

woah woah woah woah. THREESOME. oh oh oh oh. omg. i cant wait to read it!
shhhhhh. dont tell anyone i said that.
i wonder if its cole/jake/joel too!? hmmm. that would be... sinful. muahahhahahahahah

oh holly hell! youre the 'carnalli' author!!!!! i read that story! and the sequel! i reviewed lots and lots.
oh you are BAD! so bad. lol. i love those stories. mine favorites. dont you dare delete them or anything.
so i wonder now if gabe/joe/joel are going to be that threesome.... oh man. update quickly.
what the hell is this rumor? i wonder if cole thinks thats why joel stopped being his friend. but thats not the case at all it seems. joel doesnt know a rumor, and cole doesnt know that. so what is this rumor? hmmm. its gotta be something bad. really damaging.
is jake really coles dad? hmmm....
incest isnt a taboo topic for you since the carnallis are all brothers. so... im thinkin maybe joe saw cole and jake together doing something nonbrotherly? but incest isnt in the warnings. SO I DONT KNOW! update quickly.

I am still enjoying this story so much, it's very entertaining and the characters are fascinating, and I think J.C. is so adorable and I was happy to see you uploaded two new chapters before Easter. Plus, they were nice long ones too. I love the friendship between J.C., Gabe and Joe it's awesome.

Hope you can update today! I reviewed Relapse seconds ago! 8D