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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi Passhenette1. I am just starting chapter 39. I guess I don't understand why JC and Cole had Jake locked away for so long in the first place. In chapter 35 jake was having a somewhat normal conversation with JC by the pool so I don't know what happened to turn him into a dangerous person who needed to be locked away for so many days. It makes me feel that Cole is the one who is acting in a sinister way, and I don't understand why JC would allow him to lock Jake up for so long. So that part is a little confusing to me but I am hoping that chapter 40 and 41 will help to clarify things.
kylee
kylee
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May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn, someone stole my name. lol
Poor JC, he's in some predicament. I know his brain wants to tell on Jake, but his body says different. I don't think he'd mind being tied up with Cole and have Jake doing all sorts of nasty things to him. lol
Great chapter Passh! :) Loved when Jake just popped up (in more ways than one, lol), out of nowhere to scare JC. =)
Poor JC, he's in some predicament. I know his brain wants to tell on Jake, but his body says different. I don't think he'd mind being tied up with Cole and have Jake doing all sorts of nasty things to him. lol
Great chapter Passh! :) Loved when Jake just popped up (in more ways than one, lol), out of nowhere to scare JC. =)
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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! Thank you for the fast update ! :)
Jake is the best ! And sooo sexy !
Graham made me laugh ^^
Jake is the best ! And sooo sexy !
Graham made me laugh ^^
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was waiting for Jake to make his appearance but never expected him to pop up in the shower with J.C., LOL. I am surprised J.C. didn't have a heart attack. I wonder if Graham would have broken the door down if he even suspected that's where he was. Thanks for updating, I love this story and am excited to read more of the Carnalli brothers. ~ Katie ~
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hahaha...jake is like...a ninja.
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this, Thank you very much for the update
I can't wait to read what happens next!
I can't wait to read what happens next!
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!
Update asap.
Update asap.
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I haven't been checking the site as often and have missed updates- if you have an email list please add me! Some parts of this chapter were hilarious to me. When Jake appeared out of nowhere I was shocked, but it's funny how JC simultaneously wants to escape and be caught by Jake. I hope Jake catched them both :) I love all of your stories and am excited for the next installment of the Carnalli series. Can't wait for the next update!
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April 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo excited!! The suspense in the last two chapters has been killing me!
Would it be so wrong if I told you I wanted Jake to get the upper-hand and punish them?
Hmm...that would make quite a steamy scene. Lol, I feel like such a sadist for suggesting it.
Can't wait for your next chapter! Take as much time as you need, doesn't matter if you post it in a few weeks or months, I'll still be following it :D
Would it be so wrong if I told you I wanted Jake to get the upper-hand and punish them?
Hmm...that would make quite a steamy scene. Lol, I feel like such a sadist for suggesting it.
Can't wait for your next chapter! Take as much time as you need, doesn't matter if you post it in a few weeks or months, I'll still be following it :D
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April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, glad to see you updated, it's been awhile and I was getting worried. I've missed J.C., Cole and the gang. Don't get discouraged by lack of reviews. I think people have kind of dropped away from this site because there has been so many changes to it. I love the Carnalli stories too!