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Hi Passhenette1. I am just starting chapter 39. I guess I don't understand why JC and Cole had Jake locked away for so long in the first place. In chapter 35 jake was having a somewhat normal conversation with JC by the pool so I don't know what happened to turn him into a dangerous person who needed to be locked away for so many days. It makes me feel that Cole is the one who is acting in a sinister way, and I don't understand why JC would allow him to lock Jake up for so long. So that part is a little confusing to me but I am hoping that chapter 40 and 41 will help to clarify things.

kylee

Damn, someone stole my name. lol

Poor JC, he's in some predicament. I know his brain wants to tell on Jake, but his body says different. I don't think he'd mind being tied up with Cole and have Jake doing all sorts of nasty things to him. lol

Great chapter Passh! :) Loved when Jake just popped up (in more ways than one, lol), out of nowhere to scare JC. =)

Wow ! Thank you for the fast update ! :)
Jake is the best ! And sooo sexy !
Graham made me laugh ^^

I was waiting for Jake to make his appearance but never expected him to pop up in the shower with J.C., LOL. I am surprised J.C. didn't have a heart attack. I wonder if Graham would have broken the door down if he even suspected that's where he was. Thanks for updating, I love this story and am excited to read more of the Carnalli brothers. ~ Katie ~

hahaha...jake is like...a ninja.

Loved this, Thank you very much for the update
I can't wait to read what happens next!

Great chapter!!!
Update asap.

This chapter was great. I haven't been checking the site as often and have missed updates- if you have an email list please add me! Some parts of this chapter were hilarious to me. When Jake appeared out of nowhere I was shocked, but it's funny how JC simultaneously wants to escape and be caught by Jake. I hope Jake catched them both :) I love all of your stories and am excited for the next installment of the Carnalli series. Can't wait for the next update!

I'm sooo excited!! The suspense in the last two chapters has been killing me!
Would it be so wrong if I told you I wanted Jake to get the upper-hand and punish them?
Hmm...that would make quite a steamy scene. Lol, I feel like such a sadist for suggesting it.
Can't wait for your next chapter! Take as much time as you need, doesn't matter if you post it in a few weeks or months, I'll still be following it :D

Hey, glad to see you updated, it's been awhile and I was getting worried. I've missed J.C., Cole and the gang. Don't get discouraged by lack of reviews. I think people have kind of dropped away from this site because there has been so many changes to it. I love the Carnalli stories too!