rate_review Reviews

You are doing an excellent job on this story Passhenette (finally spelled it right) What a shame that Cole and JC have been fighting for so many years for no good reason. Joe is also a mystery. I wonder if he has been jealous of JC and Cole's relationship from when they were kids. I love the story. I can't wait to see what happen's next. I am looking forward to Jake's "man massage".

I just HAD to let u know that your story is soooooooo FanFuckingTASTIC!!! Gosh I love it!

I was reading your other reviews and saw someone mention the hand thing. My guess is Cole already noticed the bruise but brushed it off (or maybe even suspected) and that's how he knew it was his hand. I mean, bruises are easy to see; they stand out. I don't think it was a mistake on your part (at the time that's what I assumed) but maybe I'm wrong.

There's been a lot of pondering on who rapes JC. I don't know why everyone's assumed it's him because there's multiple characters and anyone of them could end up raped. I guess because he's the main? I will say my guess is it's likely him though I hope it's not the case. Cole doesn't seem like he's out to get at JC so I really don't think he has any bad intentions. If anything I think he actually liked JC and that's why he did stuff with his brother at that party, and why he got so upset/angry at JC because he thought he may have told people. You know? And I just think he's hinted at it often: the bathroom scene, making comments about "wanting to see how JC'd react", being all close to him while they were drinking... I think there's more but my brain is blanking.

Joe I think is the one who told. Mostly because he hates him/and hated him then. So it wouldn't be shocking for him to blab. Though I think he harbors feelings for Gabe, I do think he's a bit... afraid about being gay. I can see someone like that blabbing about someone else being gay/bi without any problems. Plus, it was awhile ago. People change.

I really don't like that JC likes Cole's father... I hope that changes. I really want him and Cole to be together, and if the threesome/moresome meant anything deeper than Gabe and even possibly Joe. But it all honestly, I love your characters and this story and won't be disappointed which way you take it.

Like I said, so far I've really loved this story and I get SO excited every time you update. Like, crazy excited. There's only very few fics that I feel that way toward right now :) I'm a big fan of The Carnalli fics and now a big fan of this. You create such addicting/likeable stories/characters that I just can't get enough of. I'm really happy that you update and have updated so much already.

And I just want to say thank you for doing so and I look forward to reading more ^_^

Holy shit! I bet it was Joe who saw them! That would explain their animosity towards each other!

I am so loving this story! Great job! I anxiously await the next chapter! :)

Pashanette I have been having so much fun reading this new story. Poor Joel truly has a zany family. I know that Cole is in love with him. Poor Cole. I just hope they will eventually see eye to eye. Cole plus Joel plus Jake sounds delicious too.

AH! I love you, man. I love this story! This one and the Carnalli ones are always so FUN to read!! Your humor is awesome. Joan is kinda crazy! haha. OMG. I'm so happy that we AND JC find out why Cole went cold and stuff. It was wrong of Cole to automatically blame JC. JC SHOULD forgive him for blaming him and ending their friendship! But now that they've made up, I don't know how JC will get raped. I thought, befo this chapter, COle was going to rape him as payback for beating him up but now it seems like he won't. Or is he still mad at JC for beating him up? If he is, then I can see the rape happening. I want Gabe/Joe! They would swt 2gether. xD Update asap!!

Aww well that explains a lot.
JC never even heard the rumour, but it seems like Joe might've from when they were fighting. Did he spread the rumour? That would make things more complicated with Gabe, but dk.
Great chapter!
Can't wait for more!!

I want to point something out. I'm curious bout how Cole knew that Joe bruised JC's hand. You said Cole was outside Gabe's room throughout the entire exchange, but they never directly said it was JC's hand that Joe bruised. Joe just looked at it. No one SAIDit was his hand. So maybe Cole knew it was his hand from possibly peeking inside the room somehow? Yea, just reread that part, and noticed this mistake. Cuz if he was just listening outside, he WOULDN'T know it was his HAND that Joe hurt, cuz no one ever said it aloud. Anyway, update asap!

the cats out of the bag!
kiss and make up.
...i bet it was joe that tattled...

Oh my wow!!!
You've done it again!
It's a completely new set of characters, new situation, new everything, and yet I'm hooked once again!
You are a fantastic writer and I'm excited to be reading your stuff once again!
I'm glad I'm up to date on this story now and I can't wait for more!!
JC is a great narrator and Gabe seems like a wonderful guy! Cole, Jake and Joe all are very interesting and I can't wait to figure them out more!!
Love the family Jen Joan & Billi!! plus Molly and Sam(? sry I'm tired, thats the cat's name right?), can't forget the amnimals!!
Can't wait for Joe's answer!! But I am sensing something between Gabe and Cole if the whole Joe thing doesn't work out.
Hooked, you've got me hooked!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Peace