rate_review Reviews

First off, I'm thrilled with Gabe and Joe! I hope it works out for them! :)

Second, I'm thrilled with Joan and Jen getting married; I think that's awesome! :)

I still say (and always will), despite what JC thinks Jake's intentions are: still with Cole! lol Especially since Cole is really into him.

Mistake: We all sat down to eat, and my Mom surprised us with an “announcement”. All periods go INSIDE of the ending quotation mark so it correctly is "announcement."

Mistake: We all sat down to eat, and my Mom surprised us with an “announcement”. All periods go INSIDE of the ending quotation mark so it correctly is "announcement."

Um. that isn't a mistake. If it's in dialogue, yes, but that wasn't. It'd be "announcement".

I was so glad you updated again! I'm loving this fic. It's becoming one of my favorites. I especially wonder if Jake knows what's going on (that JC has a crush on him). He's def. the thief. Maybe. I'd guess anyway. But I wonder if Cole knows? I'm sure he does :) but what i really wonder is if he knows of JC's crush.... Man, this chapter was kinda hot. I mean, I still want JC with Cole, but the scene was awesome all the same. I love how you make your characters. They're just great ^^ Anyway, i look forward to the next chapter! I love this :)

do your best but if you caan't update weekly, don't beat yourself up over it. Your loyal readers will wait for you. ^^

whahhhh.....that is so sexy. O_O; It's almost like Jake knows that Cole is into JC and he is teasing JC about it. Hopefully there will be a threesome with Jake, Cole, and JC down the road....? XD The massage scene is just too hot....whew!

P.S: I'm so glad you're updating weekly now....I greatly appreciate that to get my dosage.

Damn. There was so much sexual tension in this chapter, I just about had steam coming out of my ears. I loved it. I get the feeling that there is a father son competition going on between Jake and Cole and JC seems to be the first prize. I think that Jake is somewhat attracted to JC even if he doesn't know it yet. He certainly is willing to hang out with him. Anyway this chapter was awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next.

AH! Another surprise! Love you so much for writing AMAZING stories ! I am pretty convinced Jake is truly a robber and robbed Kyle! And now I think Cole may know about his dad being a thief since he had "wad of cash." I hope Cole is not involved in it! I LOVE Cole, and want him/JC together! Joe will be SO PISSED when he finds out about what Jake & Cole did. I wonder if you're gonna make JAKE be like a QUENTIN-LIKE character because Jake has shown his friendly side so far but I know YOU CAN TOTALLY MAKE HIM OUT TO SECRETLY BE a psycho like ya did with Q!!! eep. I think Jake is hiding his true badass side. He's a badass b/c I feel he IS a robber, weapons enthusiast, and man's man. I'm scared of what Jake will do to JC now! I REALLY WANNA SEE COLE'S REACTION TO FINDING OUT JC LIKES HIS DAD! LOVE THIS STORY! I hope you can update this week again even tho you technically uodated aleadi LOL. Please update asap!!

My mistake, sry! I meant "Joe will be SO PISSED when he finds out about what Gabe & Cole did."

Yeah well, JC shouldn't forget that big wad of cash Cole had in 7-11. Where'd he get all that money? Did Jake steal the shit and Cole sold it? Interesting father-son crime duo! lol

I'm glad Joe's gonna give "being gay" a shot! hahah Gabe should NEVER tell him what he and Cole did. lol :) Well, maybe when they're old and gray and sitting on their front porch drinking lemonades! hahaha

Great new chapter. Poor Jake is JC's suspect for every robbery in town. If Jake is behind the robberies, I feel that he would have someone else do the dirty work unless he is a compulsive thief. I can't wait to find out if he could really be behind so many crimes. Love the story. Thanks for the update.