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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

person oo
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so cute. i adore this story.
i wonder how gabes date with joe went? i bet it went bad.
i cant wait for jake to find out that coles dating joel.
person dazedandconfused
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to mention that J.C. kind of reminds me of Alain, Jake of Quentin, Cole of Ven, and Gabe and Joe of Con & Cobryn, LOL. The story would get really interesting if they all took a sudden interest in each other.
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant love/sex triangle you're developing with Jake, Cole and JC. I'm holding out for Jake to win in the end, i have a huge thing for older guys especially the dark, hot mysterious sort!!! I think Cole is in love with JC so i feel a little sorry for him as JC doesn't see him that way right now and i'm hoping ever..... i'm all for the hot dad hook up!! Hopefully someone who is perfectly suited to Cole comes along!!

Anyhoo...... love love your story, Brilliant Characters ....can't wait for more!!!

P.S Rec'd your story at The Slash Pile over on LJ
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm addicted. All the tension, all the details and character development got me kinda weak in the knees :)
Impatiently awaiting the next chapter.
person kiseki
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so i have read all of your stories and i must say your like one of my top fav writers! i love the way you make your stories come to life with all the crazy drama and suspense!! just thought i would let you know someone really appreciates your work
person asdf
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think you should call this story "LOVE thy neighbor" BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!

Great chap!
person miles
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! This chapter is one of the best !
I love how JC torture himself and the massage scene !! XD
That's hot !! Poor boy's going to lost his mind !
And Jake is not a fool. I'm sure he knows...
Can't wait for more ^^
person Mint
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AH! Another wonderful and awesome chap! Don't know what to make and think bout good-ole boy Jake. I REALLY HOPE HE DOESN'T LIKE JC in that way! You've made it a possibility but you know HOW I FEEL BOUT COLE/JC! LOVE Cole! He may be my FAVE CHARACTER! LUVED HIS SEDUCTION there! Wanna know what Jake meant when he kept warning JC about Cole. What did he mean bout Cole getting out of hand????? I wanna see JC follow him in tot he woods once and find out what Jake does at night! Is he really a robber? Is cole? Happy for Joe/Gabe! No threesome please! I know this story is in the threesomes category but I want Cole/JC ONLY! LOL But you can do whatever you want since it IS your story! I love this, and thanks for updating so fast! This story always makes me excited! Update asap!
person oo
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was a brrrrrrrrrrilliant chapter!
oh man, so tense, so much anticipation! poor jc is totally going to be having blue balls if he keeps massaging jake.
i cant wait for the next chapter. is jc gonna take cole up on his offer? ah! oh boy, ill deffintely be checking for updates.
oh and i like how you have jake all outwardly friendly, but theres another side to him! a dark side! muahahahaha
person Mint
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Side Note: Jake reminds me of QUENTIN! AHHHHHHH!