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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My god....all this sex-angst is going to give me cancer. -_-;
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*dies
wow. yeah.
sheesh. im sorta speechless. i really really cant wait to read the next chapter.
wow. yeah.
sheesh. im sorta speechless. i really really cant wait to read the next chapter.
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah ! I like dangerous ! ^^
Thanks again for the fast update ! And for the long chapter...
Cole is very persistant and is his father ! What's going to happen to JC with those two ?
Thanks again for the fast update ! And for the long chapter...
Cole is very persistant and is his father ! What's going to happen to JC with those two ?
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's obvious that Jake LIKES JC... Does Graham like JC or something? Cole is probly realizing Jake's the 1 JC is in love with, and maybe knows Graham likes JC 2 too. UH OH! Hope JC doesn't BETRAY Cole. LOVE THIS, and you :D Update asap!
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit! Cole better not come back and see his DAD making a move on his B/F! lol I'm imagining that wouldn't go over too well. :)
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh oh! jake is drunk off his ass, this is THE PERFECT OPPORTUNITY for jc to question jake about his NEFARIOUS ACTIVITIES!
A)is he a criminal or what?
B)is he using his moving business to steal from people?
C)what does he really do on those midnight walks in the woods?
and most importantly, D)does he want to play some slap and tickle with joel?
A)is he a criminal or what?
B)is he using his moving business to steal from people?
C)what does he really do on those midnight walks in the woods?
and most importantly, D)does he want to play some slap and tickle with joel?
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter and the interaction between Gabe/Joe and Cole/JC along with Grahmn and Jake.
I sense threesome coming soon, possibly. I hope.
Ok, I was really thinking J.C. was going to get attacked by a drunken Jake in the shower after Cole left to find their dog but it did'nt happen.
I do think Cole better hurry back though before anything happens between J.C. and Jake. I don't thnk he'll be too happy anyway finding them snuggled up together on the sofa.
Thanks for updating!
I sense threesome coming soon, possibly. I hope.
Ok, I was really thinking J.C. was going to get attacked by a drunken Jake in the shower after Cole left to find their dog but it did'nt happen.
I do think Cole better hurry back though before anything happens between J.C. and Jake. I don't thnk he'll be too happy anyway finding them snuggled up together on the sofa.
Thanks for updating!
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June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so whats joel and gabe gonna do after graduating? what are their plans?
and i was wonderin if you were gonna stir up some drama with some of the kids that saw jc holding hands with cole, you sorta pointed it out that some kids saw them holding hands. so obviously theres gonna be gay rumors going around about them?.... maybe some of those jockys that used to bully gabe will beat up jc or something.
felicia was sorta creepy this chapter ya know. i wonder if you have something sinister up your sleeve for her.
oh, and why didnt jake mention to anyone that hed hired graham? youd think hed let the guys mom(joan) know.
oh, ive got a good question! how was graham, joel, and billi born from joan, articifical insemination or do they have a father? if so, wheres the dad at?
and i was wonderin if you were gonna stir up some drama with some of the kids that saw jc holding hands with cole, you sorta pointed it out that some kids saw them holding hands. so obviously theres gonna be gay rumors going around about them?.... maybe some of those jockys that used to bully gabe will beat up jc or something.
felicia was sorta creepy this chapter ya know. i wonder if you have something sinister up your sleeve for her.
oh, and why didnt jake mention to anyone that hed hired graham? youd think hed let the guys mom(joan) know.
oh, ive got a good question! how was graham, joel, and billi born from joan, articifical insemination or do they have a father? if so, wheres the dad at?
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens. Adding Graham to the mix, with him working for Jake's company, completely changing his style, definitely adds more mystery to this awesome story!
Can't wait for more! :)
Can't wait for more! :)
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I am so happy to see a new chapter. Now I am convinced that Jake has an illegal empire going on and that Graham is a part of it. It is such an interesting situation because I don't know how JC is going to go out with Cole while crushing on Jake at the same time.It is nice to see that Graham is being all protective of his little brother. That will make anyone think twice before hurting him.