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July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 - I just read all of this story in a few hours and holy fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk. That was the hottest thing ever. I feel bad for JC that that was semi-rape but fuck Jake is so hot. Shit. I like Cole but Jake, fuck. If Jake likes JC I will spontaneously combust with happiness.
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July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aw man, i checked by to see if there was an update, nope. im craving an upate. im stumped, i have no idea whats going to happen next, how jcs going to react and handle stuff..........bah! update quickly.
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July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I agree with "oo." CRAVING AN UPDATE! Better update this wk or else! DUN DUN DUN...just kidding LOL
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July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! This is really disturbing ! Poor JC !
I'm happy you've updated ! Thank you !! ^^
Until next time...
I'm happy you've updated ! Thank you !! ^^
Until next time...
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July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn cliffhangers!!!! urgh!!! you have quite a talent with them -_-
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July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think J.C. should end up with Joe and Gabe not Jake and Cole they make me sick after what they both did to J.C. I hope Graham notices how awkward J.C. is walking and sees the evidence then puts two and two together and deals with father and son appropriately.
Well written chapter and I hope J.C. opens up with Gabe maybe not Joe (at least right away) since he would probably kill Cole for his part in all this.
Looking foward to next chapter with much anticipation.
Well written chapter and I hope J.C. opens up with Gabe maybe not Joe (at least right away) since he would probably kill Cole for his part in all this.
Looking foward to next chapter with much anticipation.
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July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My god....this is so f*cked up. O_O; I swear if Jake and Cole are planning this together, then I feel so bad for JC. I mean, how bad it is to have your virginity taken when the other guy is 'supposedly' dreaming about his girlfriend. Also, I don't believe in being drunk enough to have sex with someone of the opposite sex and not know. Plus, Jake was too lucid to be drunk.....the b*stard. >_<; I'm almost urging JC's bro to beat Cole up and for letting it happen.
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July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WHOOP! i dont know what to think of this chapter... so this was the rape you mentioned in the warnings...
im not happy with this chapter, but i like it. this scene is gonna provide a shit ton of drama and angst i bet....
i think joel was setup..... setup by jake and cole. i think jake deffinitely knew what he was doing.
i am not happy at all with cole at the moment. yup, i hate him right now.
oh man, when joel wakes up in the morning, he is gonna be feeling majorly bad, physically and mentally, emotionally. theres gonna be guilt, cause even though i think jake and cole setup him for that lil scene to happen, jc himself doesnt know that, so hes gonna think he took advantage of jake. rape. ironic, cause jc was the one that was actually raped??? was it rape? he said 'no', and 'stop', and he told cole to get jake off him. thats rape in my book............
cole totally manipulated him. argh, im so mad. they totally played him. and what really burns me up is that experience made jc feel so bad about himself that he regretted not giving his virginity to cole that one time they were together. that is some fucked up shit.
god, what will happen now? .... you dont just wipe rape away. how is jc gonna handle this? is he going to stop seeing cole, is he going to stop massaging jake?
jesus crist, he was crying during it near the end. poor fella, bad first experience with a girl and now a guy. he'll probably be asexual now.
there seriously needs to be some distance between him and that family for awhile(for ever), cause theyre fucked up and they just hurt jc bad.
im not happy with this chapter, but i like it. this scene is gonna provide a shit ton of drama and angst i bet....
i think joel was setup..... setup by jake and cole. i think jake deffinitely knew what he was doing.
i am not happy at all with cole at the moment. yup, i hate him right now.
oh man, when joel wakes up in the morning, he is gonna be feeling majorly bad, physically and mentally, emotionally. theres gonna be guilt, cause even though i think jake and cole setup him for that lil scene to happen, jc himself doesnt know that, so hes gonna think he took advantage of jake. rape. ironic, cause jc was the one that was actually raped??? was it rape? he said 'no', and 'stop', and he told cole to get jake off him. thats rape in my book............
cole totally manipulated him. argh, im so mad. they totally played him. and what really burns me up is that experience made jc feel so bad about himself that he regretted not giving his virginity to cole that one time they were together. that is some fucked up shit.
god, what will happen now? .... you dont just wipe rape away. how is jc gonna handle this? is he going to stop seeing cole, is he going to stop massaging jake?
jesus crist, he was crying during it near the end. poor fella, bad first experience with a girl and now a guy. he'll probably be asexual now.
there seriously needs to be some distance between him and that family for awhile(for ever), cause theyre fucked up and they just hurt jc bad.
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July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to read what happens next, argh... dies... update uber quickly please.
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July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why are all your stories so sexy?