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um...the chapter was repeated twice. I don't know if you wanted to paste in the second part but forgot to actually copy it...but it's repeated twice. I do hope that it was the case...i want more....
keep up the wonderful work hun! =]
-el

It seems like the chapter repeats its self. When Graham gets up, it skips back to the beginning where cole is still at the house.

When I read the last chapter, I couldn't shake the thought that it was all a setup, that the rape was revenge against JC for kicking Cole's ass all those years ago, and I'm glad that JC has also come to this conclusion (sort of). I just don't believe Cole when he says he loves JC (especially with what just happened) because they only recently saw each other again after having no contact for years. How could love possibly develop so fast? And the story about that Rebecca girl is highly suspicious. Sounds like she was practice for Cole in preparation for messing with JC. Anyways, I feel like shanking both Cole and Jake for what they did to JC. Total scumbags. Jake was definitely awake and aware of what was happening. How could he not with all of JC's yelling?

Just to let you know, the chapter somehow doubled itself.

Really good, though! I'm excited to see the aftermath of everything when the morning comes.

Humm ! I don't think G is going to sleep in the living room ! I think he's going to see Cole...
There is some problem with the chapter... It's double or something...
Anyway, thanks for the update ! You're the best author ! ^^

wow, the last chapter made me completely shocked!!! Jake had sex with JC, Cole watched and Graham now thinks it was Cole who rapped him... it's getting complicated, but I like this development because now I'm curious: what will Jake do? At the beginning he called JC Sia, but JC heard him call his name later, so it means that Jake knew it was him or Jake wants it to be him...

Graham is a good brother, he defended JC at the right time, because honestly, Cole is a little messed up in the head to think that making JC have sex with his dad (which turned into rape) was a good idea... but I like Cole's character, even thought he's a man whore (admit it, he is :P)

This story is developing well, so I can't wait for the next chapter! And I'm kinda curious who will be with JC in the end :)

P.S. you repeated the chapter twice on chapter 17 (don't know if you understand what I'm trying to say), you may want to correct that :)

holy fuck. I feel Cole DOES love JC. I still DON'T get why JAKE raped him. I thought he cared for Joel :( I'm DYING TO FIND JAKE'S REACTION to what went down. I LOVE COLE AND JAKE since JC seems to LOVE them both despite the rape. JC's SO OBSESSED WITH JAKE THAT HE'LL PROBLY FORGIVE HIM EASILY. I think Jake likes him. Hope Jake is a good man on his secret side. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

Side Note: This chapter is repeated twice.

oh my! This is a great update!

I'm also wondering what happen to Graham? Did Cole or somebody else hurt him or something?

And I can't wait to know if this was all planned by Cole and Jack or not! It's really intriguing! ><

I really love this story! I can't wait to read more! xxx

yikes. ouch. i dont know what to say, i guess im sort or shocked that jc is taking his rape so well?

Hi, I just thought you would want to know that part of chapter is duplicated and it's the section that begins with this part:

Graham flung his water bottle in the sink with one angry flick of his wrist and started moving toward us. Even I cringed at the hostility I sensed from him.

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I expected Graham to knock Cole out especially when he found out what happened to his kid brother. He took it rather well which is a surprise to me. I think Cole got off way to easy. I also think J.C. is in some kind of denial about the rape too and that sooner or later it's really going to hit him when he least expects it and he will crash and burn. I am interested in finding out how his friends will react to all this.

I still suspect Jake kind of knew what was going on and can't understand why he would have hurt J.C. like that.

Update again soon, please.