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I think Cole does love JC but I also think that he is really messed up. He is the one who pushed JC into the situation and he was the one preparing JC's ass while they were playing with Jake. He had been hoping for the intercourse to happen. I get the feeling that he wanted to destroy the crush that JC had on Jake by creating this negative experience. I think that Jake wanted to punish the two of them for daring to mess around with "the big dog". What a mess of a night for everyone involved. I can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG! I started squealing and yelling when I saw this ! :D Another awesome chapter... feel bad again for JC. I honestly hope Cole didn't plan this, and I think even if he did, he's in love with JC. I'm expecting for JC and Cole to at least be together at the end. I also predict Jake will get involved too....you did say this was a "threesomes" story. BUT YOU USUALLY have twists and surprises so.....who knows what you have planned!!!! DYING TO KNOW HOW JAKE N JC WILL INTERACT!!!!!!! OMG I'll be anxiously waiting for more! Great job, Passhenette1!

PS - Um, can you please take that thing down? You know what I'm talking about lol...I'm starting to get panicky actually. Love this story. *hint hint*

I have to go back and re-read the last chapter. I thought JC confessed everything to Graham; I thought he told Graham about Jake and what happened. Now Graham just thinks Cole raped JC. And Graham's not forcing JC to press charges, why? If it were my sister or brother, I think I'd try to convince them to press charges.

And boy, Graham sure beat the shit out of Cole! It seems from the way Cole was acting, that he's really sorry everything got out of hand. He seems ashamed and embarrassed.

JC shouldn't take those meds before school; they'll knock him out! lol

Looking forward to the next update! :)

Yes ! I was waiting for this update !
So he beat Cole !? I can't say I'm surprised !
He's very protective with his brother...
And poor Cole ! Maybe he really loves JC... Well... Maybe not ! ^^''
Can't wait for more...

bah! what? how can jc be in 'love' with cole???
that backyard party was their FIRST official day as a couple...and jc just wanted it to be a "TRIAL DAY"... so how can he be in love?
its like hes... going through a guilt trip or something... hes a victim, but he doesnt want the one(s) responsible to take responsibility... privately or publicly(police/hospital).
in regards to the hospital bit, its always your choice to report if some kind of abuse has been done to you, the exception is children, the hospital will always involve the police then. so is jc 18? i still think he should go for a check up... at least get the test done(stds), jake wasnt wearing a condom........
i get that some people are like that, thinking its better to have it be your shame privately... but eventually... hell, i dont know...
is he in shock or something...i dunno, maybe im just the one confused, but i thought jake was the one he was in 'love' with.
and woah, cole really got beat up... im in agreement with jc here, i find it hard to believe that jake is so accepting of coles busted up appearance.
cant wait to see what happens next.

oh, and the 'chocolate starburst' bit, i have never heard IT called THAT before. points for mass confusion THEN grossed out hysteria! lol

I had suspected that Graham went to lay the smackdown on Cole when JC went to sleep. I would have been sorely disappointed if he hadn't. No pity for Cole here. He deserved it and more. Saying he wasn't strong enough to stop Jake was total bullshit. The guy was drunk and blindfolded. A choke-hold (or hair pulling for that matter) would have sufficed to pull him off just long enough for JC to escape. Cole is just plain fucked up in the head and I hope JC stays far away from him (and Jake).

Poor JC- not quite what he was hoping for. I wonder if Jake will remember anything when he wakes up and if there was a little something he had for JC as well?? Can't wait for the next update- I love all your stories :) Do you reckon you'll ever do a third Chronic Carnalli Complex? Still feeling the loss since the end of the second installment...

Poor JC- not quite what he was hoping for. I wonder if Jake will remember anything when he wakes up and if there was a little something he had for JC as well?? Can't wait for the next update- I love all your stories :) Do you reckon you'll ever do a third Chronic Carnalli Complex? Still feeling the loss since the end of the second installment...

Is it too much 2 ask 4 ANOTHA update this week?