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Aw Passhanette1! Now you've done it. I am all sorry for Cole again. I get the feeling that JC is probably on the path to forgiving him too. I think it is fine if Cole suffers for a little bit. He certainly deserves some punishment for that screwed up mess of an evening. I am dying to know what is going on with Jake though. Plus now he is all alone in the house while Felicia is gone. Perfect time for JC to find out what is going on with him. Great writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great job! Update!

ooh this chapter! I loved it and wish there was more! But I'm glad you update as frequently as you do otherwise I probably would've gone crazy awaiting for more.

The interaction between Cole and Jake makes me wish there'd be incest! I read the thread answer and it sounds as if that won't happen at all. At last a father/son one... um, perhaps they aren't father and son? Brothers? I forget how old Jake is... was that stated? I know it's been said they act/seem like brothers before (by JC) so I figure... it could be a possibility. I kinda wish it was XD Me and my incest kink. I now want a whole poly incest pairing of Cole/Jake/JC/Graham XD hotttt! HOT.

But I can make due with anyone. I honestly don't hate Cole or Jake despite what they did to JC. I mean, yeah, they are to blame. And yeah, it was awful. But I feel like we've yet to know exactly what's going on, and the fact that Jake already seemed kind of sinister almost, makes me wonder if he's more to blame then Cole is (like, perhaps he was awake?) hmmm. I still would love a Cole/JC pairing in the end though (but the incest one would be so so so awesome! and better.)

Can you answer if they're maybe either not related or are brothers? (or is that too spoilery?) I know they look similar/alike so I'm thinking they have to be related (right? I should reread this again lol). Was that scene even as intimate as it *looked* to JC? Seeing how he likes them both (at least physically) I can see him reading into something too much. I did find it sweet/kind of hot (i'm pervy) how Jake was trying to calm him. I wonder what he was saying! Jake reminds me a lot like Quentin. I feel like he can manipulate people into thinking he's not bad but has this like darker side. He's mysterious. And kind of like... intense.

I remember a few chapters back when Jake showed up around that bonfire thing and they played that game. It seemd like Cole and Jake were pretty close. Considering they could talk about sex easily... and then right before the rape like, Cole seemed very turned on about JC and Jake doing stuff. He even almost undid Jake's pants and start before JC stopped him and went ahead. Which is why I *think* there is something going on...

I also wonder who the guy is following Graham. I hope nothing bad happens! I really like Graham. I have a bad feeling about this (if Graham is telling the truth; which I think he is).

Ahh I'm babbling. Anyway, I can't wait to read more! I love this <3

Thank for updating!!!!

I enjoyed this new chapter and wonder what is going on between Jake and Cole. Who is following Graham and will J.C. be in any danger from that person? I was hoping to see some J.C and Cole action but will patiently wait to see what you have planned.

and the plot thickens...

I think Cole deliberately did not stop it because for some reason he wanted the rape to occur.

WHY else would he give "dark smile" near the end of it????

Awesome update! I loved it! I really can't wait to read more!

... and for a moment there I taught that it was Jake that beat Cole up!

...And now I'm even more said for JC 'cause he doesn't seam to know what to think anymore! >_<

I can't wait to see what will happen next! Thanks alot for the update!!!

Really good and interesting story so far. It seems different than what you have written before so I'm really excited to see what happens:)Jake apparently knew it was JC at least during part of the episode so I wonder if him and Cole planned for it to happen and they're like some evil team, or if it just kind of spur of the moment. Jake said his girlfriend's nickname a lot, but that could have just been an act if he wanted to be free of blame. I have to say that I was kind of proud of JC's big brother though. I like Cole, but man Gareth(?) really waylaid him one. I like protective older brothers:)I wonder what is going to happen next though. JC doesn't want to be around them, but this is a threesome/moresome story and I can't see Gabe and Joe letting him join in now that they're together so I'm guessing he eventually goes back around Cole. I'm not sure who to root for though. I like Cole and Jake, even though he is older, but I can't see Cole and Jake sharing him, though that would be interesting. Cole doesn't seem like he could handle that, but maybe if JC wanted him to he could. Anyway, I'm sure what's going to happen, but I'm really excited to find out and can't wait to read more!

Absolutly amazin!!!! Hopefully you can crank out another one this week? PLEASE?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

I'm rather happy Graham beat the crap out of him. But also sad that Cole and JC are done. They were cute, but there's a good chance that it was all a lie from the beginning, though I do think that Cole has liked JC for some time. ><; How very sad. And Jake? What about him? Where does he fit into this? I'm curious. This story drives me mad!