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The thing with Graham was freaking hilarious. XD Poor guy. His embarrassment was tangible.

There's so much mystery in this story. I don't know what the hell is going on and what's going to happen, and I love it! Felicia being a part of the thieving doesn't really surprise me. She *is* dating Jake and the fact that she's gone so often and for so long is rather suspicious. I can't wait to find out what's really going on.

Thanks for the update. I look forward to the next one. :)

Oh my gosh! I am panicking!!! All my favorite stories are being updated with new chapters in one day!!!!! I am trying to be sure I review them all and hope I don't miss anyone!!!

I think J.C. is a riot and love him so much. I am kind of missing Cole though but we did get another hint of him in this chapter when J.C. texted him. I love Graham so much and even more so for what he tried to do for his kid brother.

I am off to review some more of my fav other stories and just hope that one day I don't mess up big time and get the stories and characters messed up in the reviews I leave. It's bound to happen to me one of these days, LOL. The stress of reviewing is getting to me.

holly cow! that was weird! phew, g's not secretly in love with his bro or anything. whats complicated with gs girlfriend? id be interested in g and cole getting together...?
ooh, so we can add felicia to the 'bad guys' list. yea! i totally didnt like the bitch and now i dont feel bad about it anymore.
oh! oh! oh! what if felicia has convinced a guy that works for jake to do the stealing and scoping out who to steam from. AND jake suspects, so thats why hes been going out late at nights because hes been keeping watch to see if he can catch whoevers been doing the stealing REDHANDED.
... i think that is an excellent theory!
about the painkillers, they can be addicting... i can see this going either way; the pills are a no-biggie and jc gets off them and doesnt need them anymore easily and we go back to the mystery of the story. OR he has trouble not having the pills, a little addiction problem going on, that would only add to the angst and drama and action of the story.
either one is cool, i just cant wait for the next chapter! hooboy!

Oh my, I wonder what's up between Cole and Jake but bet it's because of what happened with J.C. I really like Graham and hope we see him a lot more throughout the story. I am happy J.C. is coping so well with his 'rape' and I loved the interaction between him and his big brother. They are both so cute and adorable that I want to hug them.

Humm ! This is very intriguing...
I'm afraid of the worst... ^^' Jake and his son are trouble...

And with Graham all is not black or wite...

Thanks for the fast update :))

Think Jake KNOWS WHAT HAPPENED... there had to have been blood on his penis and maybe on the couch UNLESS Cole cleaned it up.

Jake LIKELY knows though O.O

Wow, what a mess! Graham's in trouble, Jake and Cole are arguing (I'm assuming about JC) and now JC took a pain pill and probably won't wake up until three in the afternoon! lol

Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Yay for another chapter SOON! This is all fucking mysterious which is nice. I miss ColexJC. I'm again waiting for the Jake and JC interaction. Please update asap!!! And thanks so much for continuing to update this fast, and keeping my attention. I appreciate the work! *HUGS*

Whatever that was between Jake and Cole at the end was seriously creepy. Waaaay too intimate for a father and son. I can handle brotherly incest just fine (loved the Carnalli brothers), but parent and child incest is not something I can stomach, so if your story's headed that way, I would really appreciate some kind of warning/disclaimer at the beginning of the chapter if it has a sex scene between Jake and Cole.

Thanks for the update. I really like this story and can't wait for more. :D

Okay, now there's even more layers and information in this story. I'm not even sure I can form an opinion. There seems to be hints that Jake pulled some foul stuff with Cole too, which would make a lot of sense, actually. I'm going to have a different opinion than most and say I am not rooting for Jake with either JC or Cole. Cole just seems like a person who makes a lot of mistakes, sometimes big mistakes. But Jake is seeming way too sinister for me. I really like JCxCole, though I'm hesitant because of his actions in the rape part.