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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I' officially in love with the term 'Judas kiss'. It's just too amazing :D
I loved the chapter and can't wait to see where it leads.
I loved the chapter and can't wait to see where it leads.
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow another AWESOME and wonderful chappie! Excellent writing like always :D I was totally rereading certain parts of the Carnalli series again! It's been so long that I reread that series that I've sort of forgotten how good the quality actually is. I heard you were thinking of PUBLISHING the first CARNALLI story when I still had access to Aarinfantasy and I was *cough* spying on your blogs there... lol. I think you have a DEFINITE chance of being published somewhere if you really want to.... I'll say it again,Passh - you have talent for sure and are an excellent and awesome and amazing author! lol I always seem to gush about how great you are in my reviews hehehe !
Wow this chappie was exciting. But NO there wasn't any COLE OR JAKE *cries* Hmm, I'll admit that I am a little OBSESSED with them! LOL But I'm glad Jake's car made an appearance... at least it's something hahaha ;) I hope that Jake is really GOOD... and Cole as well. I don't want them to be TOTALLY BAD LIKE MAYBE JAKE IS THIEVING FOR A REASON...idk if that can make sense truly. I can't wait for more, Passh! Hope you can update THIS SOON AGAIN...or maybe sooner!!! You spoil us with these fast updates. *Bone crushing hugs
Wow this chappie was exciting. But NO there wasn't any COLE OR JAKE *cries* Hmm, I'll admit that I am a little OBSESSED with them! LOL But I'm glad Jake's car made an appearance... at least it's something hahaha ;) I hope that Jake is really GOOD... and Cole as well. I don't want them to be TOTALLY BAD LIKE MAYBE JAKE IS THIEVING FOR A REASON...idk if that can make sense truly. I can't wait for more, Passh! Hope you can update THIS SOON AGAIN...or maybe sooner!!! You spoil us with these fast updates. *Bone crushing hugs
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nothing is as it seems with this story. very suspenseful that way... i have no clue whats going to happen next.
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi Passh. Um, one quest - JC says he's "still in lust with Jake" in a previous chapter but in Chapter 14, he says he was "in love with his father." Was wondering if you simply forgot to fix the mistake to change "love" to "lust" in Chapter 14 or if JC has fallen OUT of love with Jake after he raped him? Curious about this.
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August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING job again!!!!!!!! I pray to whatever God is out there that you can hopefully pump out another one THIS WEEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I don't know what to make of the fact that Graham gave JC a hand job. In my opinion, I can't imagine someone doing that unless they were attracted to the other person. Even if I thought someone had touched me in the past, I would not touch them in return unless I wanted/was tempted to touch them. So does this mean that Graham is harboring some feelings for JC as well, maybe feelings that developed because he thought JC had touched him first? Either way, I don't think we have seen the end of that situation. I also wonder why Felicia would call attention to herself by returning the necklace so publicly? I can't wait to find out if Jake and family are truly involved in these robberies. Great chapter Passhanette1. I can't wait for the next update.
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, so the plot thickens. First JC finds out Graham thought it was HIM who sucked him off that night! lol Luckily JC didn't tell him it was Cole. Then JC finds out about Felicia, who he thought was innocent in all of this.
What will Graham think? I hope HE'S not involved!
Terrific chapter! I'm on pins and needles here; can't wait for the next one! :)
What will Graham think? I hope HE'S not involved!
Terrific chapter! I'm on pins and needles here; can't wait for the next one! :)
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha, sorry for the double review; I really thought AFF ate my first one! Sorry...
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
JESUS... another update SO SOON! Well I'm glad that it seems Graham and JC aren't gonna hook up since incest STILL freaks me out surprisingly. I could tolerate the CARNALLI'S and actually enjoy it since the quality of those stories was AMAZING!! It was hard NOT to like the characters and plot xD
You're a gifted author with talent for sure. *cries* I want to see Cole and Jake with JC! MISS THEM LIKE CRAZY. I enjoyed this chappie! BTW, I was banned from Aarainfantasy because I APPARENTLY did something they disapproved of. I Didn't like that site much anyways. Thought ya should know LOL.
Okay Can't wait for more, Passh! xD You rock,hun.
You're a gifted author with talent for sure. *cries* I want to see Cole and Jake with JC! MISS THEM LIKE CRAZY. I enjoyed this chappie! BTW, I was banned from Aarainfantasy because I APPARENTLY did something they disapproved of. I Didn't like that site much anyways. Thought ya should know LOL.
Okay Can't wait for more, Passh! xD You rock,hun.
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know where you can move your post...if you want. 2 of my fave authors have review responses in a section called "Slash." This is how you go to it in the forums:
Go to "All Other Subdomains" under the "Fanfiction" section on the main forums page. It's at the very bottom. Then, you go to "Original Writing" under the section titled, "All Other Subdomains Subforums." Next, click on "Slash" and you're there!! yeah, I think many authors type their responses and stuff there.
I hope this helps!
Go to "All Other Subdomains" under the "Fanfiction" section on the main forums page. It's at the very bottom. Then, you go to "Original Writing" under the section titled, "All Other Subdomains Subforums." Next, click on "Slash" and you're there!! yeah, I think many authors type their responses and stuff there.
I hope this helps!