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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol I just read how many "plot thickens" review reactions you got. XD
so i'll say something different this time...hm....
well, i guess it makes sense why cole didn't mind having jake (or should i say...blake???? XD) fuck JC. as much. i guess.
lol
i wonder why they need to steal though. cool beaned chapter!!
so i'll say something different this time...hm....
well, i guess it makes sense why cole didn't mind having jake (or should i say...blake???? XD) fuck JC. as much. i guess.
lol
i wonder why they need to steal though. cool beaned chapter!!
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Meant Bet they lied about being father and son...
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, brothers, I definitely didn't see that one coming! Nice twist!! I wonder how Felicia plays in all this. The plot thickens and I am loving it all. This is kind of like a puzzle and all the pieces are being put together. More soon, please.
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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found this while looking for brothercest stories and I decided to read it first before investing the time in reading the Carnalli Bros stories, and all I can say is WOW! I'm sooooo hooked. I've never read anything with such a twisted plot before. I have no idea what's coming and the characters have left me baffled! There are so many unanswered questions that I don't even know where to start!
But I will say this: I SQUEALED WITH DELIGHT that you included a 2010 Camaro into the story. I can just picture Jake driving it. So freaking hot!!! I own a 2010 Orange SS/RS with black stripes. Her name is "Cam." She's sex on wheels. When I'm feeling nice, I let my husband drive her to work. Otherwise, she's all mine. Since you must like the Camaro to write about it, I thought I would share mine with you. Here is a video of my car if you are interested: http://youtu.be/NYOk3yQe6gU. This was taken after my husband installed a camshaft/headers/cold air intake/ported heads and a Borla catback exhaust installed. She now has 550hp.
Anyways, awesome story. Looking forward to the next installment. Oh, and I WILL be reading the Carnalli Bros next.
But I will say this: I SQUEALED WITH DELIGHT that you included a 2010 Camaro into the story. I can just picture Jake driving it. So freaking hot!!! I own a 2010 Orange SS/RS with black stripes. Her name is "Cam." She's sex on wheels. When I'm feeling nice, I let my husband drive her to work. Otherwise, she's all mine. Since you must like the Camaro to write about it, I thought I would share mine with you. Here is a video of my car if you are interested: http://youtu.be/NYOk3yQe6gU. This was taken after my husband installed a camshaft/headers/cold air intake/ported heads and a Borla catback exhaust installed. She now has 550hp.
Anyways, awesome story. Looking forward to the next installment. Oh, and I WILL be reading the Carnalli Bros next.
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG .. this is so twisted. Jake is such a dark character: it's obvious he's hiding something. It's enough to remember how he suddenly lookes towards Jc's window in the middle of the night, his unexpected amused expressions and cold eyes and also Saturday night! he gives me chills.
and Felicia, too, isn't likeable at all.
Out of that family Cole, actually, seems the most genuine and normal. but now I have my doubs this is not just some sort of revenge for him (because of his smug expression while Jc what in pain that night). even so, I still get the feeling he's trustworthy (maybe because the reason behind his constant taunting of Jc in the past looks more amd more like a teenager crush)
hope you'll update soon. I'm afraid Jc will get himself in trouble pretty soon. :( also, I'm dying to know how much will Jake let on that he knows. or the other way around. theese dangerous games of cat and mouse are thrilling.
and Felicia, too, isn't likeable at all.
Out of that family Cole, actually, seems the most genuine and normal. but now I have my doubs this is not just some sort of revenge for him (because of his smug expression while Jc what in pain that night). even so, I still get the feeling he's trustworthy (maybe because the reason behind his constant taunting of Jc in the past looks more amd more like a teenager crush)
hope you'll update soon. I'm afraid Jc will get himself in trouble pretty soon. :( also, I'm dying to know how much will Jake let on that he knows. or the other way around. theese dangerous games of cat and mouse are thrilling.
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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories don't remember if i have reviewed before but read all the carnelli brother stories and carnelli complex II twice all the way through. So I was totally stoked to see you had started this story. It is great so far and very suspenseful. The scenes are descriptive and panty wetting good. I really like Graham and the banter between the friends never fail to wring a chuckle out of me. I hope Jake ends up as JC's main squeeze. While Cole is cool and all tings dashing, there's nothin' like the real thang.
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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW you dedicated this to me. Thanks lol I was hoping my begging would helpmake you update and it DID! Good job!
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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well shit. I'm glad JC told Graham everything and I'm glad Graham believed him. I'm also glad Graham isn't in trouble with that detective.
I was a tad confused about the whole gas thing. I know it's not really part of the plot, but I noticed JC stopped off at the 7-11 to get gas b/c he didn't get a chance that morning. But he told Graham he saw the gray car parked when he went to get gas that morning. It was a bit confusing, although not plot-related, so I guess it doesn't matter.
I'm wondering what Graham's gonna do with all the info on Jake. Who is he gonna show the articles to?
This story keeps getting better and better! Great job Passh! :)
I was a tad confused about the whole gas thing. I know it's not really part of the plot, but I noticed JC stopped off at the 7-11 to get gas b/c he didn't get a chance that morning. But he told Graham he saw the gray car parked when he went to get gas that morning. It was a bit confusing, although not plot-related, so I guess it doesn't matter.
I'm wondering what Graham's gonna do with all the info on Jake. Who is he gonna show the articles to?
This story keeps getting better and better! Great job Passh! :)
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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For a moment I thought G knew something...
But he seems to believe his brother...
Thank you for your update ! :))
But he seems to believe his brother...
Thank you for your update ! :))
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update today!!! *crosses my fingers*