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Was waiting for this yesterday haa.I'm glad you managed to finish this last night. Again, awesome job! Guessing Jake and Cole went into hiding, and they so know Cindy hired a detective. Hope Cole was about to tell JC the truth about what's going on w/him & Jake. This is awesomely mysterious, and I had even guessed at one point that maybe Jake was in like a mob or mafia family or maybe there's a crime organization involved somehow...I do wonder if Jake is involved mob/gang/mafia activity with like his job.

I laughed at certain parts throughout this chappie. I'm not gonna lie...I was seriously disappointed Cole of Jake didn't appear. I'm dying to see like HOW Jake will interact with JC... I think he DIDN'T like totally want to rape JC since Graham said Jake seemed a little...OFF before so he's probably NOT like Quentin in that aspect. I does help he was drunk when he raped him so.
I'm anxiously waiting for more, and also, I'm glad that you're not going to ABANDON us when this story is done. I also don't get why the story is called what is it... like maybe it applies to a future situation which will suck if that occurs since I want JCxJakexCole together. Ahem...alright, I'm done rambling now LOL :D
Update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If I beg again, will this make you update? lol Sohere I am on my knees (not literally hahahaa)... Please, oh-great-one, update today!!!

OMG OMG OMGOOOOOODDDD!!!!!!! >__<

Holy!! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS is all happening!!!!!

When will Joel go confront Jake and Cole about why the hell they ran away...! and all the stealing... is Jake really a thief?? Is Cole one too?
I sure hope not! I like Cole waaaaay too much >_< Fudge!

Poor Joel, he seems to be a trouble magnet! *so sorry for him* lol
I hope one day he'll be able to be in peace... hopefully with Cole. Those two are just so HOT together! And it seems that Joel can't help himself to be attracted to him! Cole is irresistible LOL

And so if they are really brothers... then it's possible that Jake is muuuch younger then he passes himself to be right?
So Jake-JC is a bit less disturbing lol ...not that it bothered me much anyways ehe but I still like Cole better! Dunno why... ^^

BTW your story deserves all the attention it's getting! Your a FABULOUS writer! You must know that by now but I'm sure it doesn't hurt to hear it again! LOL *grins*

Now I sooooo can't wait to read more! PLZZZZ more sooooon!

Thanks again for the good read! xxx

Omg, Blake/Jake and Cole are brothers and not father and son? And if what Cindy is saying is true, why did they run away? And what does Felicia have to do with all of this? Does she know? She's obviously involved with the thievery.

I wonder if Graham's gonna go over and speak with Jake and Cole?

So now there's yet another mystery to solve! This story keeps getting better and better! I'm gonna check out your new and improved thread! I hope it works for me this time! lol

WOAH!

YAY! You have no idea how HAPPY i was to see this thang up!! I hope everything is alright with you regarding the hurricane. I was FRIGHTENED when I thought it was possible that like maybe you wouldn't be able to update for awhile for whatever reason.

I was so DELIGHTED Cole finally made his much anticipated (well, for me, hehehe)appearance. AH and he drove Jake's car! Gotta tell ya, I hope we get to see Jake actually driving in it or better yet, if JC can RIDE in it with Jake... hmmm, and Cole. That would be freaking hot if all three of them were in there hehe. I'm actually a little surprised how the idea of incest btwn Cole and Jake doesn't totally freak me out since incest in stories usually grosses me out except your series xD Your series made me much more comfy with incest. Anyways, OMG OMG Jake =Blake! Jesus... so many surprises. I wonder why they seemingly ran away from their old life. And it looks like they got plastic surgery to alter their appearance mabye. Can't wait to find out what happens next!! You definitely create HUGE TWISTS AND TURNS in your stories which I love... it gets more exciting and interesting. Please update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The plot thickens !!
So maybe Jake isn't Cole's father but his brother !?
And the mother is creepy !
Thanks for the fast update ! I'm always happy to see a new chapter of this story !
:))

Great job; Bet they lied about being bros so it would be harder to track them.

Shit! The plot thickens! Are Jake/Blake and Cole brothers? Or father and son? Are they thieves or are they running from a past that is trying to find them? And how does Felicia play into this?

Now Cole is seriously starting to give me the creeps. I can't tell if he really cares for Joel or if he's up to something else. Even Joel was having the heebee jeebies, like something was off about Cole. And Cindy is a lying skeez. Yeah, like the real reason she's trying to find them is they have an inheritance she desperately wants them to have. BS!! Again, I am at a loss as to where this story is going. Usually, I get a sense of where the plot is headed. I'm totally clueless on this one! My curiosity is now starting to get the best of me! Waiting anxiously for next update!

THE PLOT THICKENS OOOoooOOoooOOOooo!!!

Awesome chapter! I wonder what's up. That woman sure is suspicious. XD