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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

person Mandy
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's Friday, Passh. I think it's time for an update, don't u think? Huh? -wink wink-
person miles
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Humm ! I think Jake heard them...
G is the bad boy of the story ? I thought it was Cole...
Poor JC someone always wants to force him !
Thanks for sharing :)
person dazedandconfused
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This story is really bringing back memories to me of the Carnalli brothers and oh how I miss them! The only difference is there are two sets of brothers instead of one whole set. Graham is so hot and sexy but I am curious why he is pushing J.C. so much after what he went through with Jake and Cole. Oh, and Jake heard what G said to J.C.! I detect some sort of jealousy there. I hope we find out where Cole is but he must be with Jake. I hope. I am really interested in hearing what he has to say so am looking forward to next chapter.

I really loved the shower scene between J.C. and Graham, it was really steamy!

I get a kick out of Billi and how she gets revenge on J.C.

Poor J.C.!!! I hope those images don't end up on Facebook, LOL.

I loved the remark Joe made about J.C. wearing a dress to match his nail polish!

I am glad there is alot of comic relief in this story along with angst.
person Mint
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude, how? How could you leave it there? Do you like torturin' us with your evil cliffhangers? LOL Um, you ARE great with cliffhangers though.
This was very awesome again!! Wow, Graham sure won't give up on JC, won't he? JAKE!!! OMG! JAKE MADE HIS APPEARANCE finally!! I'm ecstatic he's finally BACK in the picture. You probly HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I MISSED JAKE! I might even like Jake more than Cole! I love my Cole too. *sigh* I can now sleep at night since Jake is here LOL and I'll probably be like re-readin' his little scene in this chappie over 'n over despite how small his appearance was until you update again! Also, YUMMM, almost drooled there when he came in with his cowboy hat. He is like a VERY HOT COWBOY with that hat lol. Please update asap!!
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God!!! I was so excited when I saw you update!!! This was an AWESOME chapter! Brothercest.....yes, and in the shower no less!!! Yes I miss the Carnalli Brothers. :) This was sooooo hot!!! Poor J.C. Having all these hot boys/men wanting in his pants. Damn, I wish I had that problem...lol minus the brother...ewwwwww. And JAKE IS BACK!!! Yes! I missed him and it's about time he and Joel have a talk. I also sense that Jake isn't too happy with what he probably heard going on while standing outside of the bathroom door. He seemed a bit pissed about it. Jealous? I hope so! So when they go downstairs to wait on Jen, I have a feeling there will be some pretty heated words, especially when Graham goes into protective brother mode.
person Mandy
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes finally! I enjoyed this lots! Update soon!
person Thuly
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No....J.C....why are you feeling guilty? The man raped you eventhough he was "drunk". -_-; Seriously, that's just messed up.
person oo
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow. i cant believe graham was so... forceful.
happy that the ristons are finally back...
god, i cant get over what graham just did. graham has a dark side, and he hides it very well.
person LadyHawke
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just adore this story and want to cuddle J.C. It seems everyone wants a piece of him including his big brother.
I really enjoyed the Carnalli series and am ok if you swing that way with J.C. and Graham. I have missed Cole and am glad Jake is back. I would like to see a foursome with Graham, J.C., Jake and Cole.

I am sorry you were sick and hope you are feeling better.

person CelticThunderFan
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I am so happy that Jake is back and what an entrance he made! Wow, Graham is possibly more possessed with J.C. then the Riston brothers. I don't think J.C. stands a chance against those odds. Graham and Jake kind of reminded me of two stubborn bulls read to lock horns. I can't wait to find out what he has to say.