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JC is sooo fucked ! :P
Thanks for the new chapter ! You're the best !

Ty for the new chap! Great writin'!

Please updat ASAP!!

Passhenette, where art thou? I clicked the aarin fantasy link on your profile page but nothing comes up except it says to log in so I guess you have to be a member to look at it.

I'm really enjoying this fic :). It's rare to find an original m/m fic that isn't dreary and sad all the time. I've had a hard time finding good fics here at AFF lately. Ratings and reviews don't seem to help a bit! But I'm so glad to find a good one finally. I'm also just procrastinating while I'm supposed to be writing my own fic! lol

Just finished reading the story and wow,the story is so intense and keeps you at the edge of your seat.At times I was thoroughly confused of jake and Cole's motivation or line of thought behind their actions.Is jake in love with Cole and is JC just someone he's attracted to?And If Cole is in love with JC then What does he feel for jake?This is the reason I don't read stories which end up with three ppl together(I'm big on monogamy and can't get my heart in the story otherwise)whenever i would see a new update,i would debate on reading it but now that I have, I don't regret reading this:)The erotic and action packed parts of the story are enthralling.JC's narration makes the this ride all the more fun and I love his character.A sequel would be great but right now I'm really looking forward to if you would happily end this story with all three together or something else.Thanks for writing and sharing.

I thought this story had disappeared and was very delighted to find a few new chapters I somehow had missed!

Oh my gosh! I was so excited to see that you had updated and am also very excited for the next installment to the Carnalli brothers saga. Bring it on!

Wow, the pace of this is really picking up towards a climatic conclusion I am sure. I loved the action in the two recent chapters. Please don't take too long to get this story finished and who knows maybe a future sequel?

This story is amazing!!!

Passh! You're back! lol

I didn't realize I missed the chapter before this last one. I can't believe Joan just left JC and Cole to walk all the way back to the house. She didn't realize she was sending them to the devil, so to speak.

I don't know how the hell JC is gonna get to Cole now that Jake got him cornered. How is he even gonna get him in the car if the locks don't work?

Great two chapters, Passh! Hopefully the next one we won't have to wait as long...

Oh my gosh! You're back and how I have missed you! Welcome back!

What a great chapter but seriously someone could have been really hurt bad and I thought for a moment J.C. was going to get shot when Jake and Cole were fighting over the gun. I hope Cole can stay ahead of Jake but he is determined to catch him, LOL.

I am anxiously waiting to read next update so please don't take too long this time.