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I am really dying here to find out what the deal is with Jake and the pink lace. I've been having dreams that Jake and Cole are going to dress J.C. up to look pretty much to his horror.

OMG! what does he need pink lace for?? lol

Yes! Update!!! Totally made my Friday. I couldn't wait to read this. God, Jake is one sexy man. Sigh. Things just keep getting more weird with this story! I mean, seriously! So Graham wasn't totally innocent. He took the money. What did he do with it? And I'm dying to know what exactly went on during that time. And the dressing room scene was hot. Did Jake really need to put his hand down JC's pants? I think not...lol.

This is one of my favorite stories on here. It's filled with all sorts of twists and turns AND has my favorite car :)

Yes! Finally! This was very GOOD! xD Update soon!

love the update!

pink underwear..ahaha

put it on cole! j/k

can't wait to see how awkward things are for jc XD

Oh ! God ! This is priceless !
Sooo ! Jake saw them ! Maybe it gave him some ideas ! :))
Really, thanks for sharing and have a good week...

I'll tell ya; Cole was dedicated! He drove ACROSS THE STATE (and I'm sure we're not talking about Rhode Island - no offense to anyone from R.I.) twice to see JC at school.

Somehow I get the feeling JC's mom isn't gonna be thrilled with the idea of JC getting mixed up in Jake and Cole's crazy business. And why didn't Jake pack JC's phone? That would get me nervous.

I hope Cole will be happy to see JC. I hope they make it to see Cole. lol

And what's with the hidden bag of pink? Does Jake have a secret pink undie fetish or something? Or a new g/f? lol

Looking forward to more Passh! :)

It's Friday, Passh... can you update today please?

Yeah! Update! I am so happy! Thank you!

You just gotta luv J.C. he's too cute for his own good. I really was thinking, at first, that Jake was sort of kidnapping him but then knew it was ok when Graham called. There is something really weird going on and I am dying to find out what it is.

I wonder what is up with Jake and Cole and are they going to dress J.C. up like a girl!?

I loved this chapter and am looking forward to the next so I can find out the mystery of the pink lace and who Jake bought it for!

OMG! This chapter was FULL OF JC 'n JAKE! Woohoo! Thanks for updating quickly again. As long as you don't update once a year, I'm fine with whatever updating schedule you choose. You can't please everyone with attempting to updat once a week. I hope you're feeling all bettah now!! It's kinda funny since I got sick too recently; I'm better now though.
This chapter was full of surprises and revelations kind of. SO Jake knows that JC knows about his thieving. I bet Jake knew ALL ALONG that JC followed him in the woods all those times and watched him during those nights. Man, I wonder how Felicia plays into this. We learned she probably knows or is possibly involved with Jake's robbin' people thing since she returned that necklace to Kyle's mom. HMMM, is she even Jake's girlfriend or is that just a cover as well. I'm dying to find out all the juicy details of the truth! Also, what is up with the end? The pink lace that Jake got? Wtf? Also, this reminds me of when JC caught a red thong or thongs in Jake's bedroom in Chapter 12 (I think). I thought those were Felicia's but now this chappie has me wondering more about it now... I can't wait to see COLE, and I wonder how he'll react to seein' JC!! Alright, I'm done rambling lol
Luv this! You're probably one of the best slash writers I know, and the Carnalli series might just be the best quality slash I have EVER read; seriously, the series made me feel things I haven't felt in awhile when reading other slash stories. Okay, I think I'm done finally now with what I have to say. I'm sorry if I took up too much of your tim. Please update asap!!!! *hugs you*