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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*laughing*
You know... I love this story, its one of my absolute favourite ones... every time I fear you´re up to finishing this story or believe there won´t come more odds JC´s way you happily twist the story and JC´s life more...and I am glad you do. Actually I hope you still got a lot of ideas and developments on mind for this so the story will continue for a loooong time- I´ll miss it when it´s finished. Your characters are great, I hope to read a lot more :)))
Anyway, thanks for updating, I really appreciate and as always will be waiting for the next chapter:)
Best wishes
Chi
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! What a chapter! Zane better not kill Jake, otherwise how the hell is JC gonna get back?????

Wow, so much has happened; I feel so bad for Cole and Blake. Horrible thing with Blake dying. Jake seems like such a good guy now; taking care of those kids the whole time, trying to keep them out of trouble.

I hope him and JC make it to Cole in one piece!

Great chapter Passh! :)
person Mint
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Jeeeez. WOW. This is so shocking!! I can't say I'm surprised by what you revealed in this chapie since it IS you LOL ;P Holy crap. I'm still tryin' to digest what we've just learned here. The most surprising info was learning that Jake is NOT Cole's brother since you've said numerous times that they look SO MUCH ALIKE but I guess this makes sense since Jake got plastic surgery to look like Blake, Cole's brother. I can't wait for Cole and JC to be reunited, and even more, they BETTER make it back to Cole alright even though Jake is already injured... Ouch. Poor Jake. I hope he winds up beatin' up Zane's ass just for that unecpected pounce!!!!

I wonder what the plan is to lose Cindy's men. I wonder if Jake's "friends" are actually his FRIENDS or are they more like his allies? This story seems to get more shocking, and even more awesome every single time!!! YOU ARE SO CREATIVE and awesome with your stories!!!! I CAN ONLY HOPE TO BE half AS GOOD AS YOU ARE AT WRITIN' STORIES IF I DECIDE TO WRITE. Anyways, you are the epitome of awesomeness, and I luv this! I also can't wait to find out about Felicia, the pink lace, JUST WHY THIS STORY IS CALLED "Loathe Thy NEighbor" and other stuff. Hope you haven't forgotten about explaining just how Felicia knew what Kyle's mom's necklace looked like. I'm so excited for the next chappie, and it's awesome that even though you've been busy more lately as it seems, you still end up crankin' these chapters out for us. I seriously love how dedicated you are. Update asap, Passh!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I am totally confused now by what's happening. I just hope that Cole, Jake or Graham don't end up getting killed, and especially my J.C.!!!!

Poor Cole, losing his big brother Blake that tragically!!! I am gonna cry!!!!!!!!

What a fantastic new twist to story and it blew me away. I hope J.C. doesn't get hurt by Jake and his friends and their testosterone.

Does Graham know about Blake?

Please don't take so long to update next chapter!!!
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! A lot of info was given finally :) Now I feel I have a grasp on the story. Still don't know if J.C. can get past his attraction to Jake. He's still hot for him. And Cole knows this. Anxious to know how this will all work out.
person kylee123
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I don't know how I managed to miss chapter 26. When I read this chapter I thought to myself that JC had jumped from the frying pan and into the fire. Going with the guy who kind of raped you a couple of weeks ago? He must be lovestruck. Anyway when they were in the car, Jake said that he was sad that JC found out how he made his living. I was wondering what he meant by that since JC has not found positive proof that Jake is involved in the burglary ring. Love the zipper scene. I love having Jake and JC alone in the car. They are my favorite pairing. Poor Graham has been shut out! Haha. Anyway I am off to chapter 27 to see what happens next.
person kylee123
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Welcome to life on the wild side JC. I hope he will give Jake a massage and kiss all his bruises better after that fight. I am such a Jake fangirl. Especially after learning how he has been taking care of Cole and Blake (before he died). He just gets more and more sexy as the story goes on. I hope he will be able to get these people off his back. I don’t really trust that Cindy person. I am just glad that Cole is old enough to be on his own. I wouldn’t want her to get her hands on him again. I hope that lacy pink stuff is for JC. That would be awesome.
person Mandy
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. Update soon!
person Mandy
schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope ya can post real soon!
person Mandy
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No chapter this wk?