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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

person Kiseki
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok truthfully i have a little mini heart attack every time i check this story, hoping there is an update lol!!thanks for updating when you can though all of your readers truthfully appreciate it! i hope you update today its the day you usually do but i know you have a life as well so, no pressure! hope to see more of your crazy plot twists in future chapters as well as the Jc/Cole reunion!!
much love =D
person dazedandconfused
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, geeze, that was so very hot! I loved it but am kind of upset because of poor Cole. He's going to be really pissed off when he finds out, and you know he will eventually, then probably will take it out on J.C. in a bad way. I really love your stories and have dreams about these guys you write about.
person Mint
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! I don't think anyone saw the sex comin'! LOL Can't quite believe Jake and JC ACTUALLY did it!! I do think Jake and Cole will eventually agree to share JC since it is SO FREAKIN' obvious that he belongs with both Cole and Jake... Maybe even Graham 2?? Also, I couldn't help thinking throughout readin' that whole scene with JC and Jake that JC was betraying Cole lol. I know that he and Cole aren't together but it sure felt like a betrayal to me! lol AND HOLY SHIT; when Cole finds out about this...he has to, right?, he is gonna be one PISSED and JEALOUS man I'm guessin'. This chapter was intense, scary at times, adrenaline filled and overall sexy! hehe. I absolutely CAN NOT wait until Cole reunites with his one and only love. I also predict JC will take him back REAL soon since he is in love with him still. Great job, Passh! Keep up the great work! Oh yeah. I also noticed a few days ago that you changed the first Carnalli's category. Anyway, have a Happy Thanksgiving! Update asap!!!!! *hugs*
person Kiseki
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omgosh!!! thats so much to take in, hopefully they do decide to share it would make my year lol but i have such a deep seeded like for this story already that i would like the way it turned out no matter what
much love =D
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Did that.....Oh.My.F'ing.god!! Did that just happen???? My fantasy just came true!!! Joel and Jake!!!!!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Goddamn Jake is one hot piece of man meat. Seriously!! Cole who?

person Mandy
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope you can update this Friday!
person Crimson
schedule November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG MATH ERROR. Man! These plot twists are driving me crazy. This totally awesome, Passhenette C: [Although I'm not really into the whole cross dressing kink, it was fun to read xD]
person Lisa
schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, holy crap, holy crap! Omg, so many new things to take in! Felicia/Phillip, never saw THAT one coming! lol JC dressing as a girl; not that either! haha Although I must think that he'd look pretty hot as a chick.

Jake coming on to him, kinda didn't see that one either only b/c of Cole. I don't think Jake would betray Cole that way since he knows how Cole feels about JC.

And I thought JC was getting all decked out just to sneak into a car and drive to Cole's. Now they're going to a party. Hahah, this next chapter should be a doozy! :)
person Raven
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i just knew those pantys were for him! wow soo close to a tittle action between him and jake. cant wait for the nest chapter. gets to play jakes girlfriend huh.... i got a feeling that he might play that part for all its worth lol
person dazedandconfused
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I am really starting to worry about J.C.'s safety now!!!! Oh my gosh, what is Jake thinking of?
I don't think Cole is going to be too happy with what is going on. Looking forward to J.C. and Cole's reunion.
Felicia/Phillip!!!! I never saw that coming what another amazing twist!

I am really keeping my fingers crossed that J.C. ends up with Cole and perhaps Jake could end up with Graham. They can always pair up together in bed but that's how I would like the main pairing to end up. Like the Carnalli brothers, ya know?

P.S. I really should have known the pink lace was going to be for J.C.