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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

person dazedandconfused
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are ok and that you get back to writing really soon. I know you must be busy cause of the Holiday season and all. Please don't forget us and come back by next year!!!!
person Mint
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope you are well... I'm already missing this lol
person Mandy
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope you haven't forgotten about this story!
person kylee123
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter Passhenette1. JC finally got to make love to Jake like he wanted. The sex was so sizzling hot, how could Jake think of never doing it again? Plus the score is Jake 2 and Cole 0 right now. I don't want to break Cole's heart so I hope that Jake and Cole will learn to share. Sharing is good.
schedule November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man, this chapter had such a hot sex scene. I really want to see more of that XD. It was surprising that Jake remembered what happened when he kinda raped JC. It also surprised me when he said JC belonged to Cole. That just hits it home...I look forward for when you update next! I want to know if they will tell Cole, and if they do, what his reaction will be. By the way....the whole "sharing" concept hit me with very hot scenarios. I appreciate that lol.
person miles
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohh ! My ! That was so hot ! I need a cold shower now ! ;)
You're really good at this ! The sexy moments ! ^^
I like the plot too !! And I can't wait for more, as usual...
Never do it again for those two ?! I don't think so ! Cole and Jake are going to learn to share...
Thanks for sharing and happy Thanksgiving !
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo JC!!!! What about Cole???????? If Cole ever finds out he's gonna be pissed!!!!

I was confused at one point. When Jake first put the condom on, he started stretching JC with his fingers, right? So then why did he take the "used condom" off and put a new one on if he never was inside JC? I didn't understand that.
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I totally forgot to mention that JC didn't even bat an eye when Jake ADMITTED that he was awake during that first time and knew everything that went down.

And I also forgot to wish YOU a Happy Turkey Day Passh! :)
person Saminada
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! FINALLY they do IT!!! And it was soooooo HOOOoooOOOOtTTT!!!

...I feel a little bad for Cole but I`m sure he`ll get his turn! :D
I still see Joel with Cole in the end lol But Jack is darn HOT too! *dies* ;)

I can`t wait for more of this! I`m so happy every time that I see an update for this story! :D Thanks alot!
person Mandy
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
We finally got some smex! Yes! Hope to see more soon. Update soon!