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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

person Anon
schedule December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope you surprise us with a Carnalli story for Christmas!
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wait, so what did Cole mean by that?! And what is going to happen next? Ah I am ready for the next update right now! Please update soon!
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Once again- I do love this story! Thanks for updating:)
I can´t wait for the next chappie- Jake leaving without a word and Cole being angry and jealous- I actually feel sorry for JC- he´s in a messed up situation... WAH, wanna read more!!
BTW I really like Ritchie, he´s kinda cool, maybe he´ll appear again? I´d love to read more about him...
Chi
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 30: Oh shit. Cole knows they had sex. He has to know! He walks in the motel and there he stands naked with the towel around his neck, not waist, thinking he was Jake. PLUS, Cole has known all along his crush on Jake (hence why the "night" happened in the first place. So will he end up with neither of them? Can't wait to find out!
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to say Happy Holidays to you! Hope you get to feeling better. Looking forward to your Christmas day surprise. I HOPE it involves the Carnalli bros. I MISS them!!! :) But whatever it ends up being, I'm sure it'll be awesome! You are a fantastic story teller.
person Mint
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! Thank you for updating. I understand why it took longer to post. This chapter was very great like the rest!! I am surprised that JC 'n Jake had sex more times since Jake was all "I won't take you to bed anymore" last chapter. Again, it feels a LOT like JC is betraying COLE during all those intimate scenes w/Jake!! Poor COLE!! Here's what I think happened at the end when he showed up at the motel: I think the moment that he saw JC wet and naked greeting Jake this way, he made a guess that JC and Jake probably got together somehow. Maybe he correctly guessed they already had sex. And, Cole is trying not to show how heartbroken 'n jealous he is by being stoic. I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT'LL OCCUR BETWEEN COLE AND JC next chapter; it's exciting just thinking about it. THis story is progressing smoothly and awesomely like usual.

AND I hope that YOU have a MERRY CHRISTMAS.
Oh yeah! I'm anticipating what you apparently have for us on Christmas Day! You're giving us an Xmas present!!! You're the best!!!!! Happy Holidays, Passhenette1!!!!
person Mandy
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! Great job! Keep the chapters coming please Update soon please!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so happy, you updated before Christmas plus now you are giving us a very special Christmas Day bonus present that I am highly anticipating on reading with a nice cup of hot chocolate and marshmellows.

I really felt bad for Cole walking in and finding J.C. naked and just out of the shower knowing he was expecting it to be Jake and not him waiting for him. Actually, I am kind of surprised Cole seems to be taking it so well and am expecting him to explode a little bit.

I still would like to see J.C. with Cole and then Jake and Graham together but also a foursome with all of the would be reall cool too.

See you again Christmas day and hope you and your family enjoy the Holiday too!
person miles
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to thank you for your steady update. You're one of the best ! :)
Furthermore your stories are really great and hot !!

Cole is jealous I think. And he must feel betrayed too.
I can't wait for more ! ^^
Happy Holidays...
person Lisa
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha, cracked me up when JC was worried about getting a fungus from the motel shower! lol

So now Jake FINALLY admitted to realizing it was JC he was screwing that night and not Felicia.

Now did Jake tell Cole what happened between him and JC before they got to the motel? Is that why Cole doesn't seem so thrilled to see JC and isn't asking him any more questions?

Gah!!! Now I have to wait till after Xmas!!!! :(:(

Well, at least I still can read the "surprise" you'll have for us! :)

Have a great holiday Passh! =)