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for Loathe Thy Neighbor

by Passhenette1

person Mandy
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Where's the next chapter :(
person kylee123
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
JC must be feeling so confused with Cole's distant behavior and Jake's confusing actions. I think Cole is trying to be a good friend and to keep his hands to himself, but it must be kind of painful to hear JC talking about Jake. I hope JC and Cole will get some of their issues dealt with. I would love to know how Cole is really feeling.
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha, something tells me JC is not "just being sensitive" and Cole is actually keeping his distance so he doesn't jump JC.....that would be nice.
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering whether you are ever going to put up some deviant art images for this and the Carnalli series! I would love looking at it if you every do.
person Mandy
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Please update soon.
person Lisa
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why doesn't JC just ask Cole why he's acting so different?

And yes, I can see how Cole might be upset with JC for bringing up Jake and the money. I'd be upset too if I found out
the person who was taking me in and taking care of me was only in it for the money and what he could get from me.

Good chapter Passh! Looking forward to the next one! :)
person miles
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Arrg ! It's always too short ! :))
I think Cole is right to trust Jack...
Waiting for more ^^
person Mint
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad you are logged in. I was hoping for more sexy Jake in this one! I really hope we can keep liking his char. Hopefully he won't turn out to be EVIL, ya know? I hope JC ends up with Cole and Jake but the title of the story is makin' me all worried about this. Anyways, wondeful chappie! Keep up the great work.

Please post more asap!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I hope it's not true what J.C. is thinking about Jake! I still kind of want J.C. and Cole to end up with each other! Thanks for updating!
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Man, from the perspective of this chapter, Jake is a real jerk wad. I want to know what is going on inside his head. And I especially want to know whats going to happen between JC and Cole! Please update soon!