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for Spiral

by ricotehemo

schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a great beginning, to a great story! I hope you update soon.
person wynja
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THis is very interesting so far! I really like how you set it up and presented the characters! Might very well turn out tobe a favorite of mine....
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not sure what the spiral is at the end, but I'm really enjoying the story so far!

Can't wait for chapter 2! :)

schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interested to see where this goes; I'm connecting with sash already :D