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by ricotehemo

schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chap! :)
schedule May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oOOooo Sasha thinks Dominics hot!!
person wynja
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looooved it! Soooo much better than Paul McKenna... ;)
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this hypnosis theme. Its so eery in the sense that someone can have complete control of the other person yet fasinating since you can take that anywhere. I'm more curious to find out if Sasha actually notices that things he has done were a tad bit weird.

And lol at Dominic ordering Sasha to masturbate XD It kind of makes me feel that Dominic has a very childish side to him.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very intrigued by the premise of this story. I'll be interested to learn more about dominic's relationship with his family, and sasha's predicament. And gotta love some twisted hypnosis :) You write very clearly and succinctly. Makes the tension really sharp. Hope you continue soon :)
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, but you're a good creepy creeper! lol

What a chapter! I'm not sure if I like Dominic more or less in this chapter. At least he did make Sasha study! I wonder what he'll think though when he sees the recording? hahah

Can't wait for the next chapter; hopefully we won't have to wait so long....:)
person Ruffner
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love it! I totally didn't expect the whole hypnosis thing but it's so great! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter! Thank you for the great story!
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is just so VERY interesting!!!! And what is with him recording the Russian?! Odd...Please update!
person jeazard
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking your story so far!
Dominic is a fascinating character, can't wait to see what else he's going to do to Sasha. =)

~jea
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh I like it! It'll be fun to see where this goes! :D