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for Second Exit

by Melsiebug

person jeazard
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Exit~ XD
His first echoback sorta crush (or at least attraction), that's so cute!
Couldn't comment on the last chapter because I wasn't home, but I'm back now.
Poor Exit, people keep trying to marry him off. Good luck explaining things to the village. *giggles at the thought*
Lokking forward to Wednesday!

~jeazard
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like Exit's optimism. It makes even bad things seem like a great adventure. I hope he'll like what the other echoback want to show him but I have a feeling it won't be that easy. Barney seems like someone "on a mission" and I'm pretty sure it doesn't make him a better listener.
person wynja
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No time to read in the week right now, but that meant I got to read two chapters in a row, which was great! It will be amazing to find out more about Echobacks! You write characters amazingly well, it feels like I know them, even the new ones, though I actually know very few facts...
person jeazard
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy early update, does your Sunday start at the same time mine does? I wasn't really expecting an update when I checked, and yet here it is! ^__^x

So Exit is only beginning to realize that he's going to be confronted with a lot more Echoback culture than ever before, and everyone will expect *something* of him, when really all he wants is to live his life the way it works.

Lovely chapter, very much looking forward to the next one though!
person jeazard
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter, another chapter~ *dances*

Liked this one a lot, especially since Exit got to meet (ex-)Father Barnaby, but also because of the last scene with Vio. =)
Exit never did know that it was more than a playful insult until he met Tallis and other echobacks, and Vio hardly means it in an offensive way... and yet it is, and everyone else is so beautifully angry. I like Vio a lot, by the way.

Looking forward to Sunday!
~jea
person jeazard
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, and yay for Sunday updates!
Can't wait for chapter 12~
person wynja
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Phew, at least they are not in any immideate danger... I can see this being difficult for Exit, he mus feel sympathy for the cause, after all, if not for the method...
person wynja
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YYYYeees! I was right! ... that's big for me, I'm really thick... ;) and damn that cliffhanger was evil!
person jeazard
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT, Sundays and Wednesdays~ *happy dance*

Great chapter, this one!
I sooo knew that Kremmen would be an Echoback! XD

Is it just me or did Exit's name ring a bell with that last guy?
Can't wait for Sunday!

~jea
schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Exit is about to meet someone from his past? maybe someone named Jack? I had no idea that Kremmen was am echoback! But looking back at the story it makes sense, and works well with the story. Im looking forward to the next chapter!