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for Second Exit

by Melsiebug

person jeazard
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah, Tallis!
But Exit is just dreaming, isn't he?
Of course he is, the sea is miles and miles away. >__<;;

I'm still waiting for some negative reactions to Exit's affair with Llando...
And Sunday is still so far away!
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay Tallis!! I knew he could make it... even in a metaphysical way! Barney can't taint Exit's coming of age now!
person Aveleene
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"... I've tasted blood and I want.." MORE MORE MORE *Q*

XD
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ugh. I hate that Barney thinks he can take the place of a father figure. He isn't even the right species! I wish Tallis could pop out of no where. :(
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what is the echobacks' stance on homosexuality. Seeing how Llando is so secretive about the whole thing, it can't be too accepting. I find it cute so far, the way he doesn't seem to be too experimented. All the people Exit has been with are always men with strong personalities and enough experience to know what they want.

Barney frighten me, I hope he will let Exit go and won't make trouble when he realize he is a city boy through and through. Sampson was nice in this chapter. People who like children can't be all bad even if they are rather marginal.

It's really different to the first adventures with the pirates but I really enjoy it so far.
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh so cute i love it cant wait for more!!!!! :)
person jeazard
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, so Llando IS interested! =D

It sounds like the village generally doesn't look too kindly on same sex relationships (which would make sense, seeing how they're a small community that needs children to survive), at least that would explain Llando's initial reaction. Or maybe being really curious about these things is an Echoback thing? XD

Can't wait for the smut next chapter~!
~Jeanne
person jeazard
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I see some weird eep forest ritual coming up in Exit's immediate future...
And I wonder if Sampson will be of clear mind any time soon. ^^;;

~jea
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading this story today. I'm really enjoying all of Exit's crazy adventures and exploits. I do wonder how he will get out of this most resent one!
person jeazard
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Exits has a crush~, Exit has a crush~ XD
God, that's cute.
I wonder what the echoback community thinks of homosexuality? Tallis seemed to be mostly cool with it in general, but he's lived among humans for a long time.

Waiting for Sunday!
~Jeanne