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for Second Exit

by Melsiebug

person Sapphire2619
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay can't wait for more, I keep trying to guess when he will meet jack again :)
person Aveleene
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww
Poor thing :3
Be sure even if I don't write u I'm always one of the first to read the chapters was I keep refreshing day and night *-*

I really can't wait for "Third Exit" as I really wan't him to meet up with the Pirates q,q
But awww it would be so nice If the Capitan had a lover by then, a rival for exit XDDD
Awww I'm so EX(C)ITed x3
person Aveleene
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
“Exit want fuck?”

not very romantic but well... who cares? XDD

Great story and I'm so sorry I actually tried making a Exit doll but... it kinda looked like a fat lion afterwards.. don't ask me why v____v
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol. Exit has Llando trained well!! I still can't believe he can think of Vin in a positive light. I hope he gets over him before he gets hurt :(
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I feel SO bad for Tippit. So much of his life is controlled by outside forces. I hope he finds himself in the city.
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I get this strange feeling nothing is going to go as planned. I'm sure you have something insane lined up! Can't wait :)

I really like how Exit respected his culture by not disclosing the ritual to Vio. He doesn't think much of himself sometimes, but he really has great character :)
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really really love this story and i already cant wait for the next chapter...keep up the god work!!! :)
person jeazard
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good chapter, especially the end!
If all Exit takes away from this experience is to speak his mind a little more often and not go along with things because fighting them would be inconvenient, then I believe it was well worth it!

Also, i started reading Jack's story as well, though I'm only about half way through at this point. But I got there just in time to understand Exit's little flash back! =D

Looking forward to Wednes as always!
~Jeanne
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looks like becoming an adult will be of real benefit to Exit. That's good, he needs some good turns! So the beautiful woman was his mother? So... sad :( and sweet. Great chapter!!!
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wait im extremly confuseeeeeee, did he get kinap and put on a ship, orrrr is he alucionating or dreaming? il lost completly

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