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for Second Exit

by Melsiebug

person omfgg
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
JAAACCCKKKKKKKK!

this was a most suspenseful chapter :)
person Para
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Talk about a cliffhanger. Jack is back after all this time!? I'm excited! ^^

And wtf!! I knew Ev was an ass but I didn't think he'd ever try to hurt poor Exit. D:<

On the dream sequence note I rather liked it. It wasn't too drawn out and it didn't really feel as if you were trying to cop out on any story telling.
Well done! :)
Looking forward to next chapter! Toodles!

person jeazard
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I knew it!
Well, I guess a lot of people did. ^^;;
But YAY, there's Jack! Now I'm really glad I finished The Boy With The Golden Eyes the other day. ♥
Great chapter, seriously.
person Perkazy
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for unblocking that box. Now I can review
A series of stories that I have enjoyed immensely!
I love Exit and all your characters! Thanks for writing
And for keeping me entertained!
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Now I'm almost afraid to read the next chapter!!
person Alora Sky
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Your writing style is simply fantastic! I wonder if the Captain Quint and Topher will be in this edition? I really miss them. The sex was amazzzzing, and the drama, don't forget the drama. And the angst, simply delicious angst. Exit still has the belly ring! Does this mean he's still hanging onto Quint? Oooh, I can't wait for Exit to tell him of his new adventures, and the following angst for his little, *perceived* disloyalty.
person womo
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Girl you'd be getting way more reviews if you turned off the "must be logged in to review" option.

I'm usually browsing aff.net logged off myself and when I see that I have to log in to review it's like: too...lazy... XD And I know it's not true, but it just feels like the author either doesn't want reviews if they don't accept anon reviews, or that they are too chicken to get feedback from anon people so why bother. I mean you have a ton of hits so it's apparent that a lot of people read this story. And you have a shit ton of 5 stars. It's the "must be logged in to review" option that is turning away...I'd say about 75 percent of potential review responses.

As for the story, Llando seems...like a really horny teenager. I guess he is though. He seems way hornier than Exit though and that makes me chuckle inside.

schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I adore llando's grammar. And I suddenly want a "forest fuck" hmm... The anticipation of them getting to the plantation is seriously killing me. It better be epic or I might just die DX
person jeazard
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

thx for the new chapters! I'm sorry for not having left a review for the last chapter. ú__ùx
I want to take this opportunity to thank you for always updating on time. I always look forward to Wednesdays and Sundays, and you manage to never let us down. =)

~jea
person Rosei
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear LL,

Still love this story!!!!!!
(Sorry I'm the shits for reviewing!!!)

This story really keeps me guessing and I LOVE Exit!!!!!!!

The forest has been a great experience for me and I'm really going to
miss it!!! SEE!!!!! I've have gotten sucked into your story!!!!

That's how great it is!!!!!! HA!!!!!

Thank you for continuing to write the further adventures of Exit!!!!!

Sampson and Vio have been a whoot!!!! LOVE Llando!!!! "Forest fuck?!!!!!"

Thanks!!!
R