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That would make a great movie, especially the last scene. I can picture it very well in my mind, the two lovers in front of the sunset sharing a kiss as the end credits roll down the screen. Or is it really finished?

Whatever happen next, please please let those two have a really beautiful story together. They deserve it. And I love how easygoing Jack is. His reputation in the army cracked me up. Big gay sergeant is just too much. And that scene in the alley was hot. Though I do no approve of peeping Toms. Guess the view must have really been something.

You are honestly one of the best writers on this site, I absolutely love Exit he's such a sweetheart and such a well developed character.
I also love Jack too. Although, I've got a really bad, sinking feeling that it's going to be the end of jack soon as well as Exits short lived happiness.
I hope I'm wrong I love them two! Anyway can't wait for the next chapter and looking forward to any future stories!

-squeals-
OMG~!
I just spent my weekend reading both Exit stories. Right now i am working on 'The Boy With The Golden Eyes.' I am in LOVE with EXIT~! <3
These stories are absolutely fabulous!!!! I think they are the best Original fanfiction's I have read in a long time. I can totally see them becoming a book series......
But on another note besides me ranting about how epic you can these stories are, let me talk about Second Exit.
You have me so drawn in. I never would of thought Jack was going to show up! But what I really want to know is, is Exit ever going to see Tallis, Topher, Zizi, or Captain Quint ever again?! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out.

Let me say you really have me hooked in this world.

All words with love.
Knockout

I can't wait for the rest of the story. I love the story so far. The only thing I haven't read is the whole thing between Jack and Exit. Haven't decided if I will or not. I know you said that Exit would meet up with the pirates again but I've been wondering if Exit's mom is still alive and if he's going to see her again. I have a feeling the female echoback he keeps seeing is his mom but that doesn't really say if she's still alive or acting as some kind of guardian spirit.

God I'm too tire dto write proper feedback, I'm sorry.
But that tension between Jack and Vin? Me likey~ ♥

i'm surprised sampson cried? lol

nice to see them all back together.

vin is probably going to get super jealous. ah well. that's what exit gets for fucking with everyone. girl drama!

Awww, that is just so sweet and perfect!
...it makes me a bit afraid for Jack. Their future together seems so nice, I can hardly believe it might actually come true. ^^;;

Ah, it's not just me then. ^^x
I guess it's because we rely on the internet as an everyday tool that's very hard to replace.
It's like suddenly walking on just one leg. Of course it's possible, and there's enough people out there who do it every day, but it's not easy and definitely not comfortable.

Hope you'll be getting your stable internet connection back as soon as possible!

As for the chapter: much love! =D
Exit is right, they were both very young when they parted, and both have probably changed and learned a lot since then.
Reason enough to give Jack the benefit of the doubt.
Looking forward to the next chapter (which I'll be reading later than usual anyway)!

~Jeanne

There it is, the new chapter! ♥
Hope you get your internet troubles sorted soon, it always feels like I've lost a limb when I'm forced to be offline for extended periods of time (this sounds weird... it's really not). ^^;;

Anyway, I LOVED this chapter.
I'd so been looking forward to seeing Jack again, and I'm double glad because he's not a bad guy in the way that Exit had first thought. =)

Thx for the update!
~Jeanne

Yep! Sure did. I didn't really have a choice since my comp is being a dick and deciding not to work. Luckily the wifi is still up! ^^

And I hope Exit punches Jack right in the junk!!! >:O. Then make up with steamy oh-my-god-I-missed-you sex.

Thanks for the update! I'll look forward to Wednesday. I hope you're all fixed by then.