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London, London, London!!! How are you???? So much has been going on, but I FINALLY got a chance to read "Midwinter Alchemy"! It was really, really good. You have to do a sequel though to let us know what happened with Sam's asshole father and what happens with his sister and the birth of her baby?

So when I finished that story, I started on "Second Exit". I didn't realize how much I missed Exit until I read the first sentence. lol I don't know how long it'll take me to finish this particular sequel, I'm only on the fifth chapter. At least I don't have to wait for the next updates. :)

Chapter 22

Love the conversations between Topher and Jack!

Topher's so cute!!!!! And pushy!!!!! HA!

Jack didn't stand a chance! Nice writing for the sex scene!

Can't wait to hear Jack and Topher next conversation with Exit!

Thank you!

R

On regards to the Exit doll. You could find a talented crocheter on Etsy or something and have them make you some up. Some people are really good at making dolls, me not so much. I'll stick to small stuffed animals. I'm loving the story so far though!

- spoilers for second exit and a kind of alchemy -

Loved the story and the writing was amazing. But it royally pissed me off. I literally spent the whole time waiting for him to be back on the ship with the pirates. But no. So really the warning in the beginning wasn't enough. A "It's a new story" doesn't cut it, it's more like "If you wanted his home to be with the pirates, it's not. And remember that boy Jack that no one really cares about? Yeah, he comes back and claims Exit as his own." Ugh. But anyways, awesome story! And I love the world you have created in your stories, very, very creative and amazing.

Actually, now that I think about it this happened with the first story I read of yours 'A Kind Of Alchemy', where in the end he fell in love with his neighbor... who was boring compared to all of the other characters in the story. Sigh....

Keep on with the awesome stories though!

You should know that I been up all night reading this story and the one before it. They were absolutely fabulous. The characters are great. The plot was great. The world was great. It was all great. :)

It was good can't wait till the third part. I hope Jake and Exit still stay together till the end if they don't oh well Topher is good too. <3

I loved that you had Topher appear at the end, and that you're developing his character!
But DAMN this is a mean cliffhanger! Can't wait to read more of Exit.
And what's that of a new pet Quint got himself?
I'm really really curious what's going to happen next. *___*x

I wanted to let you know how much i have enjoyed this story and I am looking forward to the sequel and will send an email to you to add me to the list.

AHHH! OMG! Tropher! I love you! That was beautiful! Oooh, I really hope you bring in the third part! I can't wait to see Captain Quint again! I wonder what he'll say about Exit keeping the belly ring. Too beautiful. I miss him so much. I'm glade Topher is back. I wonder if there is some hidden motive though for his reasons for seeking out Exit. Other than the whole "He got a new slave and no longer loves me." BULL! Unless Captain Quint is having a mid-life crises, I can't really see him throwing out Topher, but then that might just be the romantic in me. Maybe Topher is assessing the situation with Exit, and Captain Quint is wanting his monkey boy back. LOL! Oooh, I wonder what Topher's face would be like, after Exit tells him about eating monkeys, and the slavery abolished, and Jack!

You're the best! Thank you for taking the time to write this story! I really liked it a lot!

Ack! Cliffhanger! Will anxiously await next adventure.
Might I suggest a title for chapter 3 that has been
rattling about in my head? How about, "Exit, Stage Left"
If you are a fan of old cartoons you will recognize this.
Enjoy writing your other stories, but please don't
leave us without our Exit fix for too long.