schedule
August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a great beginning! I look forward to seeing where this story leads.
schedule
March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice introduction. I think until I get use to it the brothers having such similar names is going to confuse me a bit and you seem to occasionally switch from first to third person. I am curious to see what happens next. great job!