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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Perfect surprise ending. You had me thoroughly engrossed.
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's a bad enough nightmare on the ground, considerably worse on the flight! It's really good how you've so closely mimicked the speech of pilot and air traffic control transmissions. It feels almost like a real transcript (Using "ah" in speech almost feels like pilot jargon, they use it enough!)
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a treat, to have a prompt response from you this go-around. Once again, you've captured the essence of the prompt superbly, and I enjoy the tightly woven prose as well as the precise realism of your dialogue. Thank you!