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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a plot twist! This was an awesome story, I wasn't expecting the ending at all. You really are an awesome writer!
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was incredible! I absolutely loved the twist at the end, and how very natural it seemed to live in a world full of shifters. Your writing is fluid and graceful, and your dialogue flows very naturally. Delightful, truly!
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how the title holds much meaning. I enjoyed the concept and if you ever get the urge to do more for this story (i.e. expand) I think it would be very interesting. As it stands now, it is very good and intruiging!
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Only Gary Larson would suspect them! Great ending, didn't expect it at all, even with the mysteriousness that started creeping in.
"He looked like Satan`s gay twin when he was like that" is a wonderful line :D Also, "his father had never been around" and "his father was a shifter" sounds like punny wordplay on drifter as well as shapeshifter, but I wasn't sure if you meant it :D
Finally, good intensity on the fucking at the start. Nice and hot.
"He looked like Satan`s gay twin when he was like that" is a wonderful line :D Also, "his father had never been around" and "his father was a shifter" sounds like punny wordplay on drifter as well as shapeshifter, but I wasn't sure if you meant it :D
Finally, good intensity on the fucking at the start. Nice and hot.