rate_review Reviews

Wow what a plot twist! This was an awesome story, I wasn't expecting the ending at all. You really are an awesome writer!

This was incredible! I absolutely loved the twist at the end, and how very natural it seemed to live in a world full of shifters. Your writing is fluid and graceful, and your dialogue flows very naturally. Delightful, truly!

I love how the title holds much meaning. I enjoyed the concept and if you ever get the urge to do more for this story (i.e. expand) I think it would be very interesting. As it stands now, it is very good and intruiging!

Only Gary Larson would suspect them! Great ending, didn't expect it at all, even with the mysteriousness that started creeping in.

"He looked like Satan`s gay twin when he was like that" is a wonderful line :D Also, "his father had never been around" and "his father was a shifter" sounds like punny wordplay on drifter as well as shapeshifter, but I wasn't sure if you meant it :D

Finally, good intensity on the fucking at the start. Nice and hot.