rate_review Reviews

This was a really lovely little story, I enjoyed it very much. Even in such a short story, I found it easy to get to know and identify with the characters, but I would LOVE to read a longer version of this. You have a lot of talent, so I have to throw in a teensy bit of concrit--the head-hopping gets a bit confusing sometimes. Looking forward to reading the rest of this series, since I got started backwards somehow... hehe

Ok, I finished it! Wow! I didn't realize that Grant and Nikey started seeing each other AFTER the accident. I thought it was years before.

Funny how life works out! And now thankfully, just like PP&J, they're together again! lol

Great short story! :)

Oh, I did have a question tho: It said in this story that Jack came to see Dustin in the hospital a few times (I think). I thought from Reflections, he only came that one time to tell Grant and Nikey that they had a fight and broke up.

Ahhh, so sweet. Couple of questions though, why did Nik not say I love you back? When Grant was his 'dream come
true'? Also, Dustin n Niks surname, is it Grey? Or Way? Cos they kept interchanging in the chapter.
Did Dustin really have a migrain or was he being intuitive? Aaaaaand, dude I wanted a confession n maybe tears from Nik, to get a sense of how much of a rock Grant had been to him. All in all I loved it n I'm being picky (specially with my last point), because esentially I wanted it to last a bit longer :,(

good luck with ur bio midterms, ur right, it is easier than micro, but I'd hardly call it an easy subject :/
after tomoro tho, u have no excuse ( not one that we know of anyway) I demand an update. On any of ur stories, I'm not overly fussy. Friends would be nice... So would Rockstar... N a bit of photography... That technically means I want an update on all three :D

There were nine points in this chapter where the Gray brothers' last name was written as Way instead. You might want to go back and fix that. Though it makes me have to ask a question, was this supposed to be a My Chemical Romance fanfiction? Because Nikey is one letter away from Mikey and the last name you were writing was Way. Just a thought that came to me so don't kill me if I'm wrong. Good story but it seems like everything's a little rush with all the time gaps.
Allie

You know, I just realized after I re-read the second to last chapter, that I never reviewed it. I read it while waiting in my car for wrestling practice to be over, and by the time I got home, I guess I forgot to r&r.

Kissing Dustin was the stupidiest thing Grant did! lol Your best friend is like your sibling! Duh! He needs to find someone else to kiss....maybe Marvin to know if he has any gay inclinations. hahahah

Great chapter though! Ok, on to the next one! :)

this chapter was so awesome and hilarious!!! aww i almost feel bad for Grant but am really curious to see how it plays out! Can't wait for more :)

I can't tell u how much I'm enjoying this, it's exactly the kind of story I would automatically click on if I see it.
Thanks for updating, n happy to know that ur working on best friends x gg

wow I'm really enjoying this one!! Glad to see that Grant is helping Nikey change!! Can't wait for more; great work ;D!!!

This story is such a nice compliment to Reflections and Photographs! I love Grant. I really do!

Yay for Grant! What a bitch that minx Melissa is!

I absolutely loved the line: '.....Dustin had broken up with his not-boyfriend Fred'. Omg, so funny! His not-b/f! hahahah

I love this side story. It's so interesting to read about them when they were in middle school and high school, respectively. But getting a funny feeling when a twelve year old smiles at you? That may be kinda creepy! lol

Anyway...can't wait for the update! On to Reflections...:)