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by Jayded

schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your very welcome! :)

Aiden makes me so angry I just want to smack him upside his head! Why is he being so mean to Metri? And to obviously reject Metri and then make out w/James? That's really cruel.

Looking forward to the next chapter; maybe we'll find out why Aiden is such an ass.....
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry for your loss Jayden.

So, does this mean that the three boys are back together? Living happily ever after? Nah, it can't be that easy! lol

Happy Easter to you too.....
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, yeah, horrible place to leave it! lol

I can't believe they live six hours away from the mental hospital! Every time they came to visit they had to schlep six hours???????? lol I don't know if I'd ever visit someone that far away. hahah

Well, I'm glad Metri is away from that psycho Karsen. Of course what about sweet Trevor? Will they ever get in touch with one another again?
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I'm such a dumbass! I NEVER noticed that when you sign your name it's signed Jayden!!!!! And your penname is Jayded!!!! I'm so stupid! So now I don't feel bad b/c I DID get your name right! lol hahah

So...poor Metri. He's gonna be constantly harrassed by Karsen, or is it Karson? Anyway, I thought Dr. Adams said quite awhile ago that "intimate" relations between patients is strictly forbidden. Why didn't he get upset w/Karson for being on top of Metri?

And how could those girls "make" the doctors give Metri an evaluation to see if he could get out of there? Wouldn't the doctors figure that out on their own after a few sessions w/Metri?

I'm glad you updated, even though it was short! Better short than nothing, right?
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i REALLY enjoy this story.
i check this site up to 3 times a day to check if my favorite stories are updated.
and this story is 1 of them.
im counting in you not to abandon... to many amazing stories get abandonned
schedule March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story! Things just seem to keep getting worse for poor Deme. Looking forward to more updates when you can. Take care :)
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey Jayden, I'm sorry to hear your family is having problems; I hope everything works out.

I felt so bad for Trevor; Metri couldn't bring himself to say goodbye to the one friend he has there. That was really sad.

And now he has a pyscho for a roommie! hahahah What's he gonna do now? Karson is one mean fucker. :(
schedule March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fuck! I did it again! I'm sorry, I keep calling you Jayden, instead of Jayded. Grrrr, next time yell at me! Sorry. :(
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i reaaaaally love this story <3 love it! Pls write more!
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
im a guy of a few words but I REALLY LIKE IT and i love the characters. Pls write more