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June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Trevor's ocming back! He's only thirteen and he's gonna take a BUS by himself??????? His parents are gonna let him just up and go?????
I also had a couple of questions: if James, Aiden and Metri are all supposed to live together, isn't the room Metri's in, all of their rooms? And where is James in all this? What's he gonna think? Aiden's gonna obviously want to "take a break" with him also, while he and Faith "figure things out", right?
Looking forward to hearing about Trevor again. :)
I also had a couple of questions: if James, Aiden and Metri are all supposed to live together, isn't the room Metri's in, all of their rooms? And where is James in all this? What's he gonna think? Aiden's gonna obviously want to "take a break" with him also, while he and Faith "figure things out", right?
Looking forward to hearing about Trevor again. :)
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June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I miss Trevor. I wish he was older...
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June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So Jesse just decides to show up out of the blue? After he just left Faith and hasn't contacted her? Wait, how does she know that it's Aiden's? Couldn't it be Jesse's?
It's Metri that I really feel sorry for now. :(
It's Metri that I really feel sorry for now. :(
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.Fucking.God. So that's what Metri's supposed best friend and his b/f were doing when he was locked away? Jesus Christ, how's he gonna handle this? He just got back, he and Aiden made up, and now this? Shit...poor Metri.
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Boy, you must have been bored traveling across country; the writing was really, really good! lol Good smut scene too! :)
I just wanted to point out something I've noticed in a few of the chapters: you don't like using capital letters when you start a sentence. For example, aiden took the keys and left. It should be Aiden took the keys and left. Always start a sentence with a capital letter. And always capitalize "I". Ok, English lesson over. I know there were a few typos, but I'm assuming that's b/c you wrote it on your phone! lol
I just wanted to point out something I've noticed in a few of the chapters: you don't like using capital letters when you start a sentence. For example, aiden took the keys and left. It should be Aiden took the keys and left. Always start a sentence with a capital letter. And always capitalize "I". Ok, English lesson over. I know there were a few typos, but I'm assuming that's b/c you wrote it on your phone! lol
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm glad Metri decided to stay and I'm glad his brothers didn't try to stop him once they got to the airport. They were really going to Russia? Omg, that would have been a disaster! lol
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, well ths was a surprse XDXD
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May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Everyone needs a little angst in their life. Even though I HATE angst! But then I guess there wouldn't be any story.
I don't like the fact that Metri is still cutting. He needs to see a therapist. I understand he feels totally out of control; he feels he has no control in his life. His brothers are deciding where he lives, Aiden decides when to be "nice" to him, etc. Cutting is the only control he has over his body. But I'm afraid one day he'll go too far.
I don't like the fact that Metri is still cutting. He needs to see a therapist. I understand he feels totally out of control; he feels he has no control in his life. His brothers are deciding where he lives, Aiden decides when to be "nice" to him, etc. Cutting is the only control he has over his body. But I'm afraid one day he'll go too far.
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're very welcome Jayden! :)
Isn't Metri over eighteen? Then Eli and Sev, or Sav, w/e his other brother's name is, can't force him to go with them, right?
I'm glad he told Aiden he loves him, and I'm even more glad that Aiden was the one who came into his bed. That's a start. He's been ignoring Metri for way too long.
Great chapter; these boys need time to patch things up. Being separated will only make it worse.
I did notice a typo: in the hallow of his throat should be hollow.
Can't wait for the next installment! :)
Isn't Metri over eighteen? Then Eli and Sev, or Sav, w/e his other brother's name is, can't force him to go with them, right?
I'm glad he told Aiden he loves him, and I'm even more glad that Aiden was the one who came into his bed. That's a start. He's been ignoring Metri for way too long.
Great chapter; these boys need time to patch things up. Being separated will only make it worse.
I did notice a typo: in the hallow of his throat should be hollow.
Can't wait for the next installment! :)
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My pleasure Jayden!
Boy, what are best friends for, than to give great bj's? lol And how old is James that Lexx is his stepson? His ex-wife must have been much older than him, right?
Why would Metri think Aiden would ever find out about the bj? As long as he keeps his mouth shut (and Lexx keeps his shut), no one will ever know.
Looking forward to more! :)
Oh, btw: the scene was awesome! Great job for a first timer! :)
Boy, what are best friends for, than to give great bj's? lol And how old is James that Lexx is his stepson? His ex-wife must have been much older than him, right?
Why would Metri think Aiden would ever find out about the bj? As long as he keeps his mouth shut (and Lexx keeps his shut), no one will ever know.
Looking forward to more! :)
Oh, btw: the scene was awesome! Great job for a first timer! :)