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Petras just can't win. And what was that ceremony that the snake dude was performing? Some sort of soul binding thing?

GREAT, i like the deal talnoth and petras made.
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL LITTLE HAREM ROOM YOU HAVE.
so, what does this 'detria' world look like. im looking forward to petras going out and exploring this land and city.
cant wait for wren to meet petras. i can totally just see petras blundering though, haha. poor guy.
is that little blonde bastard the one talnoth likes and always uses? ew, ew ew. that boy is a git.
argh, i really like talnoth, i hope he and petras can be friends, how long has it been since petras even had a friend? i bet a long time, that is truly sad, he must be very lonely. and ya know what, i bet wren is lonely too. just having sex for to sake a bodys need isnt like the fullfillment you get when having sex with emotions, doing it with someone you care about. i bet he craves a companion, or mate, whatever haspians call their life partners.
is petras human or what? does he age at all? how old is he? is he immortal? i would think his healing ability would almost stop his body from aging ya know?
are silliards humans?
if silliards are human, and petras is not human, but a haspian, then he shouldnt reside with the silliard boys. maybe this conflict will take place in the future when they realize that petras is no ordinary human. ???????????
oh, and, WHERE ARE ALL THE WOMEN? LOL. ive only read about one so far........................
update quickly.

poor petras :(

one day he will break free and be like a beautiful butterfly! fly away petras fly away!

i enjoyed the chapter. that snake thing is so weird. so weird. i imagine it's dick waving about and it makes me laugh a little though. lol. i guess i'm pretty immature...

but wow commander dude can't you save petras any faster?? i just want to smack his butt into high gear or something. XD

can't wait to see what happens next!

hohoho nice to hear that snake man died. that was really creepy. and weird that petras got pierced through the heart yet he's still alive? how does that even work? does he feel invincible now? XD

i mean if i had healing abilities that let me avoid death i'd be feeling pretty much like gold...

anyway awesome chapter. i can't wait to see what this new environment will bring.

first petras was in physical danger, now he's in danger of getting in cat fights with bitchy boys. lol

hope they don't cause too much trouble.

WOAH. i wonder, are these the demons that wren and the haspians fight against?
oh i hope talnoth finds petras quickly.
update quickly. its killing me.

lol. i didnt know what salacious meant. i had to look it up. well, i guess you learn something new everyday.
nice title and summary.
why dont more people read this? doh! theyre missin out i tell ya!
hey, if petras has the ability to heal himself, do ya think maybe he could use that ability to heal others?

ok, lets see if i got this right, so the haspians live on the same world of kandora(which by the way, did ya get from that movie 'pandora'? maybe the name should be altered abit more. it doesnt bother me, but i think 'pandora' when i read 'kandora'.) but they live on a realm above it? like an alternate dimension sorta? that is wicked weird. I LIKE IT! its almost like theyre on mt. olympus and theyre gods and they watch the fickle mortals down below.
ohh, talnoth was so angry, even if he does find petras, i hope he still goes back and kicks those gang members asses so bad that theyll never be able to procreate again. muaahhahahha
talnoth is pretty cool... you know who he kind of reminds me of? have ya seen that 'hell boy; golden army' movie, that prince guy with the long white hair whose sorta the bad guy and also a hottie? yeah, thats who i picture.
i still hope petras isnt made into a silliard, the dude just needs some peace and quiet. and poor petras, he couldnt take it anymore, so hes decided that death is better than his current existance. hes gonna need some major therapy that kid.
OH, and i bet petras will be able to stand that godly aura you mentioned with wren.
oh man, im rambling, but petras is special. i feel like im trying to defend him and stuff. that was bound to happen cause you keep torturin the poor fella.
so, i bet petras will be a silliard, and i bet those other silliards are gonna be all bitchy and catty to him. bitches. ... hahaha. lol...
i bet petras will be the one that wren will get attached to, and poor petras, he doesnt want to have sex ever again so im wondering how this is all going to work out.
really really looking forward to the next chapter.

Aww, poor little Petras; his life kinda sucks. Oh! Kraxus, Benston, and Hesh need to go castrate themselves to prevent them from reproducing....and to pay for being total slimeball bastards.... The new political(at least that's what I think it is) changes is very interesting and I look forward to what all those things are. Cause I can only guess what some things are(like the glowing spheres). Although, from what I can tell, a Sillard is a person specifically to be a sex slave.....I doubt Petras would be happy about being one of those....

poor poor poor petras, dont know how much longer he can endure under that sort of treatment...
the hasp government is interesting.
ugh, the new guy, god, hope wren knocks him down a peg or two or a hundred!
so im guessing the main pairing will be of wren and petras? im guessing. i hope it is.
yea, wren is... wren is... i just really like him! ok. lol. hes like all, zen, yea, hes very zen, but ya know, all tough. calm. wise. i like him. and the red aura, sexy. and woah! 7 freaking feet tall! damn. how tall is petras?
and OH! yes, petras has been introduced already into the picture connecting to wren. i cant wait for them to meet.
so are the haspian sillards mortals? humans? are sillards trained or something?
that nei thing is interesting too... so, like, its a deity, not like an actual being walking around? like its a voice the king hears? hah, that sounds crazy.
yea, to bentson and all those other gang members, have ya ever heard of two-fold? petras needs to tell them that they will get whats coming to them, whatever they do to petras, it will come back on to them two-fold. karma. i cant wait for that to happen. i hope it happens anyways.
so, we're talking like different planets right? like petras is on a different world right now then wrens?
space travel was neato too, very sci fi. i love it. and its slash. my kind of story.
so, petras is in games, and now the haspian lords are in games. cant wait for it. all so exciting.
im hoping petras isnt made into a sillard. i hope hes, something more. more special than... um, a boy toy?
so, haspians are immortals? aliens? and is petras a haspian? and silliards, are they haspians?
really REALLY looking forward to the next update. ill be checking for sure.

really good summary. looking forward to an update.
quickly.