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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I definitely think Wren will be able to help Petras now and knew he would save him
when Leiphe pushed him off the balcony.
when Leiphe pushed him off the balcony.
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww!! Wren did catch him!!! How sweet! Anyways, now that he is staying, we can find out some of those secrets, right? I hope so, cause I am VERY curious. It might have been a good idea to tell Ritch which personality they want gone. Cause like it said before, his other personality is very Sillard like. Ritch could have thought they wanted to take away the difficult Petras personality. Tehe, it sounds like Wren just wants another friend to talk to. Or maybe a friend with benefits....
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You keep oudoing yourself with every new chapter you write and it can't get much better than this.
I am so happy Wren saved Petras and it showed Petras' true character when he didn't want Leiphe punished
for pushing him to his almost death.
Great job yet again,
W.T.
I am so happy Wren saved Petras and it showed Petras' true character when he didn't want Leiphe punished
for pushing him to his almost death.
Great job yet again,
W.T.
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooh, happy to see this updated so quickly. yes! ka ching! good author.
oooh. there is land, its just the balcony that petras was pushed off that didnt have any under it. hmmm.
i like the new deal. and woah, boy oh boy, wren is hooked! and theyre going to try to heal his mind? wow, theyre awesome.
about that healing bit, very interesting what the docs theories are. i was thinkin it was something more... alien, or, spiritual? hmmm. i dunno. yea, we need to know about the 'incident' where it all started for petras. it was an excavation site/restore project he was working on right? and thats where it happened? well, really really want to know what happened. is it gonna be a stunner or what?
oh, and what happened to the haspians planet? was it destroyed? so it basically looks like earth right? but its like floating in the sky? but no one can it.
sweet, update quicky always!
oooh. there is land, its just the balcony that petras was pushed off that didnt have any under it. hmmm.
i like the new deal. and woah, boy oh boy, wren is hooked! and theyre going to try to heal his mind? wow, theyre awesome.
about that healing bit, very interesting what the docs theories are. i was thinkin it was something more... alien, or, spiritual? hmmm. i dunno. yea, we need to know about the 'incident' where it all started for petras. it was an excavation site/restore project he was working on right? and thats where it happened? well, really really want to know what happened. is it gonna be a stunner or what?
oh, and what happened to the haspians planet? was it destroyed? so it basically looks like earth right? but its like floating in the sky? but no one can it.
sweet, update quicky always!
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! What an awful cliffhanger!
I hope Wren sees him falling and will somehow save Petras then punish Leiphe for pushing him off and
trying to kill him. Like give him a dose of the same medicine but he won't be so lucky.
I love this story,
W.T.
I hope Wren sees him falling and will somehow save Petras then punish Leiphe for pushing him off and
trying to kill him. Like give him a dose of the same medicine but he won't be so lucky.
I love this story,
W.T.
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Jealous bitch or not, trying to kill him is too much. It is nice to know that at least someone wants Petras to have a personality. Point goes to Wren! Given the healing abilities, it is possible that Petras won't die from the fall. But it would be awesomely romantic if Wren saved him. heh, a girl can wish.
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really feel for poor Petras and all he has suffered through. He never has it easy. I am
hoping with Wren there might be a chance of him being saved. He can't die but even with
his healing abilites there is no way he can survive without someone saving him. Right?
hoping with Wren there might be a chance of him being saved. He can't die but even with
his healing abilites there is no way he can survive without someone saving him. Right?
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh No! Is he going to go all sex crazy? Well I suppose it would probably please Wren, but he wouldn't want anyone to find out his secret. Also, pulling the dick and hair is soooo unsportsmanlike. What a jerk...Oh well. And what is with the whole "putting Sillards to sleep" thing? Have they been reduced from slaves to pets?! That's messed up, even if Roth was kidding.
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I am really enjoying this story and my heart goes out to Petras. This story is very addictive and well written.
Kudos to you for a job well done,
W.T.
I am really enjoying this story and my heart goes out to Petras. This story is very addictive and well written.
Kudos to you for a job well done,
W.T.
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! MY REVIEW DIDNT GO THROUGH! BAH!
mad.
anyways, HOLLY COW! how can you stop right there? cruel, very cruel.
so yes, number 1! i hate roth and that lil bastard leiphe. roth was being so cruel, and he was mad one of his lil sluts didnt get chosen. god dang, and he was totally putting petras down the entire time, belittling him. who the hell does he think he is!? he has no right!
oooh, im so mad. he better not mess with petras anymore.
poor petras, he does not need any more cruelty done to his person.
and liephe, god, what a little shit head! why oh why couldnt have petras kicked that kids ass! please, in the future, i totally want that kid to be slammed.
number 2! im also very disappointed in talnoth, i really really liked him, and now im mad at him too. its like hes almost uncaring, hes insensitive to the horrors that petras went through. HORRORS! for gods sakes, he found the kid near dead, STABBED, brutally raped and tortured, and he wants petras to give his ass just to please his lord? to get his lord excited? what the fuck? i mean, really, am i overeacting, cause that just doesnt sound like a person who cares about anyone besides themselves. bah. in a way, to me, its like talnoth is using petras, hes no better than all the others that hurt him and used him. what talnoth should have done, was to get petras help, a safe haven to live, WITHOUT ASKING FOR SOMETHING IN RETURN. is that concept lost to haspians? doing a good deed without asking for payment in return?
bah, im totally being snooty. sorry. its just wrong! im sorry.
so im betting petras naughty other personality came back there at the end. yea, i have a problem with that too...instead of a sex crazed maniac petras getting humped by a disinterested wren, i much more would have prefered them just having a conversation or doing something non sexual. maybe they could star gaze together? lol.
anyways, even though im all peeved, i totally totally loved the chapter. really nice.
i really wanted petras to kick that kids ass, but it was very realistic that petras didnt, he doesnt have fighting skills, and plus hes been starved so hes unhealthy, unfit, and weak at the moment.
the wrestling scene, WOW, nice, i liked how you had leiphe doing all those underhand moves, like he tackled petras when petras wasnt paying attention, and he pulled his hair, and pulled his penis. thats not sportsman conduct, thats what that is. someone should have called foul damnit!
stupid talnoth, i would have thought he would have looked out for petras, apparently i was wrong. dead wrong. talnoth doesnt care for petras wellbeing at all.
anyways, i liked how wren is just so not even into this sillard thing. like hes bored, tired of it. it doesnt interest him. and here we go back to talnoth, talnoth is trying to find something that interests wren, and he believes that to be petras? i still dont like how talnoth treated petras, its like he just threw the poor boy to the wolves.
and petras the entire time is praying to leave, he cant wait for the week to be over so he can walk away. freedom. youre crazy if you dont have petras grab that opportunity. no way would anyone pass up on freedom.
so where was i, oh, and havin wren not even paying attention to petras in the beginning was realistic too ya know.
poor petras, getting sick during the 'teaching' scene. cant they see this kid needs help? sheesh. theyre so stuck on themselves they cant even see past their own noses.
anyways, petras being anxious and getting sick like that was realistic too, its only to be expected after everything hes been through. again, talnoth is suck a dolt! why put petras in a scenario that has anything do with sex after the kids been raped? very insensitive.
liephe is a frickin bully, i bet hes going to continue to torment petras. argh.
by the way, i was NERVOUS the entire time i read this chapter. nervous i tell you! yea, the story has affected me, well, petras has i guess. i just want to hug him and tell him its going to be alright.
i so cant wait to read what happens next. update really quick. pretty please.
mad.
anyways, HOLLY COW! how can you stop right there? cruel, very cruel.
so yes, number 1! i hate roth and that lil bastard leiphe. roth was being so cruel, and he was mad one of his lil sluts didnt get chosen. god dang, and he was totally putting petras down the entire time, belittling him. who the hell does he think he is!? he has no right!
oooh, im so mad. he better not mess with petras anymore.
poor petras, he does not need any more cruelty done to his person.
and liephe, god, what a little shit head! why oh why couldnt have petras kicked that kids ass! please, in the future, i totally want that kid to be slammed.
number 2! im also very disappointed in talnoth, i really really liked him, and now im mad at him too. its like hes almost uncaring, hes insensitive to the horrors that petras went through. HORRORS! for gods sakes, he found the kid near dead, STABBED, brutally raped and tortured, and he wants petras to give his ass just to please his lord? to get his lord excited? what the fuck? i mean, really, am i overeacting, cause that just doesnt sound like a person who cares about anyone besides themselves. bah. in a way, to me, its like talnoth is using petras, hes no better than all the others that hurt him and used him. what talnoth should have done, was to get petras help, a safe haven to live, WITHOUT ASKING FOR SOMETHING IN RETURN. is that concept lost to haspians? doing a good deed without asking for payment in return?
bah, im totally being snooty. sorry. its just wrong! im sorry.
so im betting petras naughty other personality came back there at the end. yea, i have a problem with that too...instead of a sex crazed maniac petras getting humped by a disinterested wren, i much more would have prefered them just having a conversation or doing something non sexual. maybe they could star gaze together? lol.
anyways, even though im all peeved, i totally totally loved the chapter. really nice.
i really wanted petras to kick that kids ass, but it was very realistic that petras didnt, he doesnt have fighting skills, and plus hes been starved so hes unhealthy, unfit, and weak at the moment.
the wrestling scene, WOW, nice, i liked how you had leiphe doing all those underhand moves, like he tackled petras when petras wasnt paying attention, and he pulled his hair, and pulled his penis. thats not sportsman conduct, thats what that is. someone should have called foul damnit!
stupid talnoth, i would have thought he would have looked out for petras, apparently i was wrong. dead wrong. talnoth doesnt care for petras wellbeing at all.
anyways, i liked how wren is just so not even into this sillard thing. like hes bored, tired of it. it doesnt interest him. and here we go back to talnoth, talnoth is trying to find something that interests wren, and he believes that to be petras? i still dont like how talnoth treated petras, its like he just threw the poor boy to the wolves.
and petras the entire time is praying to leave, he cant wait for the week to be over so he can walk away. freedom. youre crazy if you dont have petras grab that opportunity. no way would anyone pass up on freedom.
so where was i, oh, and havin wren not even paying attention to petras in the beginning was realistic too ya know.
poor petras, getting sick during the 'teaching' scene. cant they see this kid needs help? sheesh. theyre so stuck on themselves they cant even see past their own noses.
anyways, petras being anxious and getting sick like that was realistic too, its only to be expected after everything hes been through. again, talnoth is suck a dolt! why put petras in a scenario that has anything do with sex after the kids been raped? very insensitive.
liephe is a frickin bully, i bet hes going to continue to torment petras. argh.
by the way, i was NERVOUS the entire time i read this chapter. nervous i tell you! yea, the story has affected me, well, petras has i guess. i just want to hug him and tell him its going to be alright.
i so cant wait to read what happens next. update really quick. pretty please.