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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
After reading the note you left at end of recent chapter, I am worried now that you may
never finish this story. You mentioned updates would slow down and that
you have only two more chapters written. If you are finishing Petras' story,
at least please give Petras and Wren a happy ending.
I love these guys!!!
never finish this story. You mentioned updates would slow down and that
you have only two more chapters written. If you are finishing Petras' story,
at least please give Petras and Wren a happy ending.
I love these guys!!!
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness Wren was there to save Petras yet again. Talnoth and Hiperlon? I never saw that one coming.
It looks like Petras' journey is coming to an end by the note you wrote and I will miss this story. Maybe,
you could write another one like a sequel or prequel or something. I will keep an eye out for the remaining
chapters.
It looks like Petras' journey is coming to an end by the note you wrote and I will miss this story. Maybe,
you could write another one like a sequel or prequel or something. I will keep an eye out for the remaining
chapters.
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March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
" "But whenever you stumble and need assistance, you shall find my shoulders broad and my back welcoming.” " that was truly beautifully worded.
awww, talnoth and hiperlon. interesting.
petras has so many different views and opinions, he should go into haspian politcs and pass some new EQUALITY laws.
HOT DOG! Oh my. dude, i cant believe wrens been carrying that around. i wonder, did he do that on purpose so that petras would find out? baahha. manipulator.
haha. now that wren knows petras blushes so easily, he should tease the kid ALL THE TIME. fun.
so what im getting from the riza flash back and why petras was exiled, is that, petras went like on a killing spree or something of that sort?
i liked the pool scene so much. ive been craving to go swimming, my parents just bought a house that has an inground pool and i havent been swimming since i was a little girl. so im longing for summer to hurry up.
awww, talnoth and hiperlon. interesting.
petras has so many different views and opinions, he should go into haspian politcs and pass some new EQUALITY laws.
HOT DOG! Oh my. dude, i cant believe wrens been carrying that around. i wonder, did he do that on purpose so that petras would find out? baahha. manipulator.
haha. now that wren knows petras blushes so easily, he should tease the kid ALL THE TIME. fun.
so what im getting from the riza flash back and why petras was exiled, is that, petras went like on a killing spree or something of that sort?
i liked the pool scene so much. ive been craving to go swimming, my parents just bought a house that has an inground pool and i havent been swimming since i was a little girl. so im longing for summer to hurry up.
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
enjoyable, very, but woah! what a bummer there at the end, foolish and embarrassing petras. bah! wasnt expecting that.
no no no, we dont like talk of wren dying.
no no no, we dont like talk of wren dying.
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!
What a cliffhanger and what the dickens happened to Petras? Oh no!!!!!
I love this story so much and am so happy you update quick.
What a cliffhanger and what the dickens happened to Petras? Oh no!!!!!
I love this story so much and am so happy you update quick.
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww, they're bonding! and Wren even felt protective against the King!(even though he didn't act on it) and wow, Petras has been in sooooo many life-threatening situations! I hope everything turns out ok...and he doesn't some type of radiation poisoning from their energy!
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story of yours and my heart goes out to Petras and all he's going through and
I am so glad that Wren is in his life to help him.
The one chapter that really freaked me out and made me cry for Wren was the chapter about that lizard guy
called Lurdocks and all the nasty things he did to him. Yeck.
You are so talented and I am very happy that I checked out this story and will follow it from now on.
I am so glad that Wren is in his life to help him.
The one chapter that really freaked me out and made me cry for Wren was the chapter about that lizard guy
called Lurdocks and all the nasty things he did to him. Yeck.
You are so talented and I am very happy that I checked out this story and will follow it from now on.
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I goofed in my previous review and should have I cried for Petras not Wren.
Ooops, me sorry.
Ooops, me sorry.
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I missed reading this story before but am glad I finally took the time to stop and read it.
Petras must be a complicated person to write about but you are doing an amazing job working on it. It will be
interesting to see how his and Wren's relationship further develops. I hope Wren can protect Petras now before
further harm befalls him.
Petras must be a complicated person to write about but you are doing an amazing job working on it. It will be
interesting to see how his and Wren's relationship further develops. I hope Wren can protect Petras now before
further harm befalls him.
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
liephe is PHYSCHOTIC!
well, surprise is me, i really enjoyed this chapter.
and i find that i liked that petras DID GO into his sex crazed persona with wren, cause now wren is totally obsessed with him.
hes got the endurance, now the kid just needs the personality and hed be perfect for wren.
which i believe he does have the personality, its just his normal self. if his normal self could combine with his limbidos of his other personality, well, hed be perfect.... no ones perfect though.
and when petras woke up to his 'normal' self, that was really realistic, oooh buddy, i loved how it was almost like he insulted wren a little bit.
im sorta amazed how, i dunno, in lust, normal petras is with wren. he like really likes the guy. huh.
alrighty, thanks for the further info on talnoth and stuff.
goodness, whats gonna happen to petras?
oh oh oh oh oh oh, an update this weekend? WOOO HOO. IM SO LOOOKING FORWARD TO IT. I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN.
is this when petras healing ability gets found out? i bet petras is really going to want to leave now. hell, he shouldnt even have to stay there the whole week, he should demand that talnoth put him somewhere else because one of his own sillards attacked petras.
dude! wren doesnt know that petras will be leaving? babahaha. hes in for a surprise, thats all talnoths doing. i bet he gets all love sick and hunts petras down. muahahaha.
bahahaha. 'tentacle monster' that cracked me up. it wasnt sexy at all, but funny. is petras goofy? cute and goofy. i like!
and yes, one issue, which would be unsanitary oral. ok, ew, who would want to put their mouth on a cock thats been in a rectum? yuck. thats not sanitary.
that damn liephe. grrrr. i wonder if that kid will be gotten rid of, or if no one will believe petras when he tells them that it was liephe who pushed him over. hmmm, i bet roth wouldnt believe petras.
liephe is PHYSCHOTIC!
well, surprise is me, i really enjoyed this chapter.
and i find that i liked that petras DID GO into his sex crazed persona with wren, cause now wren is totally obsessed with him.
hes got the endurance, now the kid just needs the personality and hed be perfect for wren.
which i believe he does have the personality, its just his normal self. if his normal self could combine with his limbidos of his other personality, well, hed be perfect.... no ones perfect though.
and when petras woke up to his 'normal' self, that was really realistic, oooh buddy, i loved how it was almost like he insulted wren a little bit.
im sorta amazed how, i dunno, in lust, normal petras is with wren. he like really likes the guy. huh.
alrighty, thanks for the further info on talnoth and stuff.
goodness, whats gonna happen to petras?
oh oh oh oh oh oh, an update this weekend? WOOO HOO. IM SO LOOOKING FORWARD TO IT. I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN.
is this when petras healing ability gets found out? i bet petras is really going to want to leave now. hell, he shouldnt even have to stay there the whole week, he should demand that talnoth put him somewhere else because one of his own sillards attacked petras.
dude! wren doesnt know that petras will be leaving? babahaha. hes in for a surprise, thats all talnoths doing. i bet he gets all love sick and hunts petras down. muahahaha.
bahahaha. 'tentacle monster' that cracked me up. it wasnt sexy at all, but funny. is petras goofy? cute and goofy. i like!
and yes, one issue, which would be unsanitary oral. ok, ew, who would want to put their mouth on a cock thats been in a rectum? yuck. thats not sanitary.
that damn liephe. grrrr. i wonder if that kid will be gotten rid of, or if no one will believe petras when he tells them that it was liephe who pushed him over. hmmm, i bet roth wouldnt believe petras.