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April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am happy you have not given up on this story because I am really enjoying it so much. I thought the
part with Wren and Petras was very well written and I am so happy they are finally bonding in such
a beautiful way. I hope that Wren is able to protect Petras from his son, Trent. I nearly screamed
out loud when he attacked Petras and I hate the way he talks to Wren his father.
part with Wren and Petras was very well written and I am so happy they are finally bonding in such
a beautiful way. I hope that Wren is able to protect Petras from his son, Trent. I nearly screamed
out loud when he attacked Petras and I hate the way he talks to Wren his father.
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April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story so much and following Petras on his journey of discovery has been
one joy ride. You are doing such a fantastic job bringing it to life and it's at the top of my
favorite list of stories on this site.
one joy ride. You are doing such a fantastic job bringing it to life and it's at the top of my
favorite list of stories on this site.
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy for Petras that he seems to be finally happy/content and it's all because of Wren. He is finally able to be himself for once. I bet that Wren would have eventualy told Petras about his son too. I hope Trent doesn't
cause any trouble between Wren and Petras not after they have come so far.
cause any trouble between Wren and Petras not after they have come so far.
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for udating!
I hope that now Petras is learning to trust Wren that he doesn't have like a relasp (I seriously can't spell but hope you know what I mean) or something after Wren's son attacked him. I kind of sensed something might happen
when Wren left him alone because it always does to poor Petras. I hope Wren shows him more about his planet and stuff. They need to talk more too about Trent.
I hope that now Petras is learning to trust Wren that he doesn't have like a relasp (I seriously can't spell but hope you know what I mean) or something after Wren's son attacked him. I kind of sensed something might happen
when Wren left him alone because it always does to poor Petras. I hope Wren shows him more about his planet and stuff. They need to talk more too about Trent.
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...my first thought to Trent was, annoying and cocky older brother....but it turned out to be his son! Even in this society, it must be considered extremely direspectful to do and say the things he did and said to Wren. Also, THEY FINALLY DID IT!! YAY!
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March 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you have decided to continue writing Petras' story. It's very riveting (sp.?) and so
well written. I am really being drawn into this story it is so good.
well written. I am really being drawn into this story it is so good.
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March 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I just realized you had upated another chapter since I last checked!
I love how Wren and Petras' relationship is forming and that Wren
was able to save Petras once again. He is Petras' Knight in Shining
Armor.
I loved the scene between them in the pool very much.
I can't begin to tell you how much I love this story and that you are
doing an amazing job writing it and bringing these characters to life.
Later,
W.T.
I just realized you had upated another chapter since I last checked!
I love how Wren and Petras' relationship is forming and that Wren
was able to save Petras once again. He is Petras' Knight in Shining
Armor.
I loved the scene between them in the pool very much.
I can't begin to tell you how much I love this story and that you are
doing an amazing job writing it and bringing these characters to life.
Later,
W.T.
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very interesting plot. leaves u waiting to see what happens next. nice other dimension, and imagery.
cant wait for more
-m
cant wait for more
-m
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, loving Petras and Wren. Looking forward to seeing Petras's power/aura? revealing/showing itself and seeing the man underneath all the pain and angst!! Curious about the south vanquishing lord and where that storyline is heading. Brilliant work can't wait for more!!
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww there is so much scandalous love in this chapter! I love it! I also love the idea of smelling "pure male" I feel like that would be a great cologne name. It's great how Wren just took the pants and cock ring like it was just his pants....I supposed it would be the best way to get out of an awkward situation-to pretend it wasn't awkward at all. lol And *my* human curiosity is going on overdrive. Where are the women?! Unless they are all test tube babies...or pop out of the ground like plants.....or what ever happened with the smurfs!