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Hey, I am still here and following 'Salaciousness' so please don't stop writing it because I was too lazy to review.

Am I detecting that there is hope for Trent and perhaps Aoash will be the one who changes him later?

Oh my gosh, I hope Wren gets out of this mess and hurries back to Petras soon.

What is wrong with Petras? Did he lose his memory? I hope to goodness he stops himself before he regrets it.

Story seems to be reaching a high point/climax? Wonder, what is coming next.

Thanks for keeping up with this story it's really very good and on top of that has characters you both love and hate.

The whole 'life-giving tool of pleasure' and 'fleshy decanter' part made me giggle like school-girl :)

AHHHH! Petras' past is so elusive and that is very frustrating! Maybe I should follow wren's example and be patient...but then again, I am not as good a person as he is. But at least we all know where the women are, what the war is about, why Trent is so upset, and that Wren doesn't want to be a Van. Lord. four points for the curious readers!

Wow, Wren is a magnificent man. Because a lesser man would have beaten his lover and then his son, although honestly Trent would deserve that and more! But then we don't know yet why Trent hates his father as much as does, I just hope it's not something petty. Poor Wren.

I can't wait to find out the story Wren tells Petras about the truth concerning the break between father and son
relationship. This story as usual met all my expectations. I was relieved Talnoth was there to save Petras from
Trent. I hope after Wren explains everything to Petras he returns the favor and confides his secrets to his lover.

I was wondering, is Petras like or could he become a bearer, or whatever you would call a male who might be able to conceive a child, and could he give birth to a son for Wren so he has an heir?

Wren is so incredibly patient with Petras. I mean, a lot of the time he is willing to tell Petras about things that are personal, and yet Petras hasn't offered anything of himself. Granted the trauma factor can be taken into account, but it seems like Wren was pretty upset when it comes to the whole Trent thing.

I felt for sure Petras was going to by raped by Trent this time but thank God Talnoth arrived in the nick of time
and rescued him. I am relieved Wren has decided to tell Petras about his past with his son Trent and hope that
Petras will open up to him now about his own past as well. If Wren didn't, things could have started going downhill for them and I would hate to think that could have happened now that they share such a special and caring relationship with one another.

So pleased you upate this as often as you do and with each new chapter you give us more surprises and suspense.

I love this story soooooooooo very much and the fact that Petras and Wren
are such intriguing and complex characters more so. I look forward to
hearing Wren's story about his realtionhip with his son and what happened
between them to cause such hatred. I also think Petras is one of the most
fascinating characters I've ever read about on this site and think he's
a role model to anyone with a troubled past or who has suffered from
any kind of traumatic experience. Will be keeping eyes wide open for
the next update enjoy the rest of your weekend!!!!

WOW! I came across this fic purely on accident, and I LOVE it! I love the character's and the general societies and of course, the mystery that is Petras, the forbiden love just abounds in this fic! Love love LOVE it!! Have I said that yet? Well, I do. I can't wait to read more, especially with the reveal of who Trent is now. Although he already seems like the typical rich, rapist ass already.

no no no. dont give anything away.

“Truly is that what you believe?” Wren quickly grasped Petras’s right hand before he could protest and laid it against his bare chest. “Beneath this body, lies a heart you need never fear would harden against you.”
beautiful. poetic.
OMG! SUMPINS HAPPENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.
WAAAAAH!
AH!
title represent! bonus point.
'abstained'. youre characters speack so eloquently.
awww, this bit was so cute. “Truly? I feel the stars themselves would call out to you for a new name.”
omg how do you come up with this fluff? it makes me giggle and i almost blush. "Wren watched as Petras ate in silence, realizing he’d never wanted to be a piece of toast before today. But if he could be devoured by Petras’s lips it would certainly make him happy."
oh that was close! thank goodness wren was in time.
holly crow. that lil bastard is wrens lil bastard?! bah.