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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I AM SO MAD RIGHT NOW!! EVERYTIME I TRY TO LEAVE A REVIEW IT DISAPPEARS AND I HAVE TO WRITE IT ALL OVER!! I AM GOING TO SCREAM!!!!!
I AM TOTALLY UPSET, WREN CAN'T DIE FROM THAT GAS, NOT NOW AND NOT AFTER EVERYTHING HE AND PETRAS HAS BEEN THROUGH TOGETHER. WHAT HAS POSSESSED PETRAS NOW THAT HAS TURNED HIM INTO A CRAZED PHYSCO CALLED DESTRUCTION WHO CRAVES DEATH AND IS KILLING TRENT?
YOU ARE REALLY GOOD LEAVING US HANGING WITH CLIFFHANGERS AND THIS ONE SHOULD WIN AN AWARD FOR BEING THE BEST SO FAR.
LOVED (AND HATED) IT BUT ONLY HATED BECAUSE I DON'T WANT WREN OR TRENT TO DIE.
I AM TOTALLY UPSET, WREN CAN'T DIE FROM THAT GAS, NOT NOW AND NOT AFTER EVERYTHING HE AND PETRAS HAS BEEN THROUGH TOGETHER. WHAT HAS POSSESSED PETRAS NOW THAT HAS TURNED HIM INTO A CRAZED PHYSCO CALLED DESTRUCTION WHO CRAVES DEATH AND IS KILLING TRENT?
YOU ARE REALLY GOOD LEAVING US HANGING WITH CLIFFHANGERS AND THIS ONE SHOULD WIN AN AWARD FOR BEING THE BEST SO FAR.
LOVED (AND HATED) IT BUT ONLY HATED BECAUSE I DON'T WANT WREN OR TRENT TO DIE.
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April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Huh, I was under the impression that Wren was trusted by the King...if that's true, then this is really bad. Speaking of bad, Petras' alter ego is suddenly appearing. Maybe it is the stress or the hit on his head, but it is back, and with Trent in the room no less. This spells even more disaster. And right when Petras was going to tell Wren about his past!!! This is one serious cliffhanger. Worst case scenario, the Chaos Demons win the eternal wardue to this little internal squabble, and they all die. O.O' That's pretty bad...
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this story from the beginning and am totally enjoying it. It's one thrill ride and I never know what's going to happen next. I love Petras and Wren they are such intriguing and likable characters. I love the world you have created and how you are bringing all the characters to life. Some of the characters I really hate but Petras, Wren, Talnoth and maybe now Trent are my favorites. I hope story has happy ending for Wren and Petras. Maybe you could write a sequel featuring Trent as the main character, and Petras, Wren and Talnoth could make appearances in it but not be the main focus. I would like to know more about Trent.
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am still enjoying your story so I am begging you to keep updating it and am sorry I haven't reviewed but just had been very busy with school and getting ready for Easter.
I hope that Wren and Talnoth manage to get out of this very nasty situation they are in and am worried about them.
I think Trent has found someone that is good for his soul but hope he realizes it before it's too late.
Petras, what do you think you are doing with Trent? I hope he stops himself befor he betrays Wren.
I hope that Wren and Talnoth manage to get out of this very nasty situation they are in and am worried about them.
I think Trent has found someone that is good for his soul but hope he realizes it before it's too late.
Petras, what do you think you are doing with Trent? I hope he stops himself befor he betrays Wren.
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Please update soon! Hopefully, Petras stops befo too late EEP :(
Side note: I find it a little odd that you would capitalize the titles of ur stories, and dont get y u do. It kinda turned me off before I read the story since no story is supposed to be capitalized. It made me think you were another bad author but you ARE TALENTED fo sure!
Side note: I find it a little odd that you would capitalize the titles of ur stories, and dont get y u do. It kinda turned me off before I read the story since no story is supposed to be capitalized. It made me think you were another bad author but you ARE TALENTED fo sure!
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think that Trent is finally coming around and will turn out to maybe having a 'heart'. Aoash might be good for him and I hope to find out more about this Sillard and whether or not he knows Petras.
Did something happen to Petras by the healing spell Trent did on him? I think he goofed with it or something.
Did something happen to Petras by the healing spell Trent did on him? I think he goofed with it or something.
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am still here and still reading too.
A lot happened in this chapter but we learned that maybe Trent is not so bad afterall. I don't think he is anymore anyway. I don't know what the deal is with Petras coming on to Trent like that but hope Trent doesn't take advantage of his weakened mind set from the fall. Please don't let anything happen to Wren or Talnoth I will cry and besides Petras needs both of them especially Wren.
A lot happened in this chapter but we learned that maybe Trent is not so bad afterall. I don't think he is anymore anyway. I don't know what the deal is with Petras coming on to Trent like that but hope Trent doesn't take advantage of his weakened mind set from the fall. Please don't let anything happen to Wren or Talnoth I will cry and besides Petras needs both of them especially Wren.
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
o.O No words can- no words.... why? and OMG PETRAS!!
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I am so sorry I haven't reviewed lately but was kind of busy trying to write a story of my own, so apologize. I am still enjoying reading this story. I hate Trent and hope Wren kills him for what he has done. What happened to Petras and why is he aciting that way towards Trent? I hope Wren comes back with a vengeance but hope that Petras doesn't do anything that will hurt the trust they have developed between themselves. I really like this story very much.
P.S. I wanted to mention that I didn't confuse this story with another like you mentioned in a response note. I just mentioned Petras possibly being a bearer for Wren but know that won't happen because this story is not MPREG. I only said it cause Petras has those special healing powers and who knows what else he could do?!! Sorry if I insulted you or anything didn't mean too.
I am so sorry I haven't reviewed lately but was kind of busy trying to write a story of my own, so apologize. I am still enjoying reading this story. I hate Trent and hope Wren kills him for what he has done. What happened to Petras and why is he aciting that way towards Trent? I hope Wren comes back with a vengeance but hope that Petras doesn't do anything that will hurt the trust they have developed between themselves. I really like this story very much.
P.S. I wanted to mention that I didn't confuse this story with another like you mentioned in a response note. I just mentioned Petras possibly being a bearer for Wren but know that won't happen because this story is not MPREG. I only said it cause Petras has those special healing powers and who knows what else he could do?!! Sorry if I insulted you or anything didn't mean too.