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by Sweetsong22

person CelticThunderFan
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was too lazy to leave a signed in review this morning still not quite awake yet.

What an intense and thrilling chapter! You nailed it with this cliffhanger. It's one of the best
you have left us hanging with to date.

Will Wren die or escape? (I am thinking he won't die but never know)

Will Petras kill Trent? (I am hoping he won't but again....)

What caused Petras to turn into this destruction or rather bringer of death kind of maniac???

I am still along for the ride on this story.
person FuneralRoses
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was ready to cry when the gas filled Wren's cell! But then Petras got Max EXP and I was like: "Oh, hell yes! You can't talk shit now Esperon!" but then I was like: "Oh no!" B/c Petras went all Quatre in the Zero-system and wants kill everyone.... :(
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, please don't let Wren die, de-rendering gas??!!! This can't be good!!!!
I know I may have said I didn't like Trent but he's really beginning to grow on me and he did
help his brother and didn't take advantage of Petras and agreed to help him with his plan.
What the heck!!! Petras NOOOOOOOO!!! Please don't kill Trent!!!!!! I am going to hyperventilate.
person dazedandconfused
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, sorry, me again but I wanted to let you know I looked at the 'review' link you left and I think it's for the previous chapter cause I remember reading it before. Just thought you would want to know but I may be mistaking.
person Will Treaty
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
“I crave destruction. I crave death. Die – both of you!”

What the heck happened to Petras? I am really worried now about Wren surviving the gas and Trent not being killed by Petras. This chapter was intense and I am freaking out big time now to find out what happens next.

Awesome,

W.T.
person snowleopard
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am really worried now about what is going to happen to Wren with that gas and Petras trying to kill Trent.
Story really is getting nail biting now and I am literally glued to my chair watching for next chapter.

I keep hoping Wren will burst through the doors and save the day.
person oo
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what!?????
person Bella
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!!!! What just happened????? Nooooooo!!!!

Wren can't die!!!!

Petras!!!!??????

What the heck?????!!!!

schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap!! Petras is a death god!!!! or something. It is hard to tell if this is a good thing or a bad thing right now....on one hand, Trent would have died, and there would be no hope, on the other hand....Petras kills them all....lots of "worst case scenarios" in this chapter. I really hope that whatever plan Trent and Petras had before got Wren out of his cell, cause it would be a sad ending if he died. I can't wait for more!!! What a cliffhanger!
person preciouslittlehope
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so pulling my hair out waiting for the next chaper, what a CLIFFHANGER!!!!

I don't think Wren will die, I hope he won't, you won't kill him, right?

Petras is now in death destruction mode and that can't be good news. If Wren survives, how would he react to Petras' killing his only son, Trent. Even if they didn't have the best relationship I don't think he could forgive Petras.